Snow n. frozen vapour falling to earth in light white flakes. Your task is to describe the journey of a particular snowflake - remember to be descriptive and take your snowflake on a fabulous venture .... A task for the whole family!
I floated through the thick misty air and glided effortlessly with the wind. My delicate features remained stable as I peacefully made my journey down. The scenery was breath-taking and through the crispy air, I could see a bizarre snowman wearing a snug scarf and grasping a cup of hot chocolate with two delightful marshmallows tucked inside as if it were a bed. Wait, oops! Silly me it wasn’t a snowman, but an ordinary man going out for an evening stroll with fallen snow inside his fashionable fedora. I smiled to myself and looked up at the night sky. My fellow snowflakes were charging behind me, but beyond that the stars were shimmering. They seemed to be so elegant, so graceful and I was envious. They lived for billions of years while snowflakes only lived for a day; maybe two. Also they were so radiant and eye catching, one could not help but admire them. But then, I remembered that we snowflakes bring joy to children. We make them happy. So with that thought I was satisfied and I could see below me that my journey was coming to an end. I gently landed on the petal of a pleasant flower and closed my eyes, wondering whether I would come back as a raindrop or a hailstone.
Huh? I opened my eyes to find myself in a large white space with clustered ice stuck to the sides, a fridge! Also, a young boy with a guilty looking face was peering down at me. I understood what was going on almost immediately; snowflakes are clever little beings y’know! The boy did not desire for the snow to end and had preserved me in his freezer; it was understandable and I didn’t really mind. So here I am now writing this in my diary, life is pretty good in a fridge!
Wow! Awesome effort Jamin - great imagery used in your description. Happy to see the cheerful ending - there could be a part 2! Keep warm and encourage family members and friends to comment or write their own entry. Take care and keep warm. Mrs Y :-)
My Adventure Swish. I’m floating, slowly floating towards a small beautiful country it’s called New York, Yip heading towards New York. Oh no I read wrong I’m heading towards New Zealand. It looks wonderful almost like a wonderland! I’m finally here after my cold freezing journey I’m finally here! When I fell I landed on a huge yellow houses roof their were five girls playing outside, they came and picked up a huge bunch of my crisp lumpy friends and took a enormous bite out of them, four or five minuets later they were all gone! Out of sight! After that they all when inside and one hour later they came out side again! They picked up more of my soft white delicate friends squashed them and twisted them into a ball I didn’t want to look but… I did, she held the ball of my friends up and threw it and another girl that girl threw one at the other girl and that went on for ten minuets! It looked so fun I wanted to play but they didn’t touch me!
Oh damn I’ve died melted, it’s all black I can’t see a thing. Now I have to wait another four years to be reborn. Heey you shhhh they are coming! Who’s coming? The kids they are coming to play with us, now shhhh! I could here them running down the hallway putting on their warm clothes! They opened the door and ran out. I can’t wait shhhh they’re here! Today there were four little girls. The youngest ran out and started doing millions of star angels, the second youngest went out and body slammed into the snow, the second oldest started clearing snow of the three cars and the oldest ran out it shorts and stockings and she was screaming, today I knew I would get played with I just did! They all started making those balls of snow again and throwing it at each other, they were very creative and made chairs and igloos they were amazing! But I didn’t get touched not once not even looked at, now I’m an icicle hanging off their roof sad and lonely. Oh wait someone’s coming act cool, they grabbed me yeah I’m getting played with but what I just got dipped in some yellow liquid and ate me. A few days later I woke up in a white pond and no a tsunami wait I’m not in a pond I’m in a BLUB BLUB BLUB!
A snowflakes life is tiny, they come and go, nobody really understands them.
I opened my eyes I was soaring at one hundred feet, as I fell I chanted in terror “WHERE IS MY MUM?” It was gloomy when I finally reached the ground, the other snow flakes cushioned my fall. The wind blew on my face “where am I?” I had yelled . Nobody answered - dead silence. My mummy was gone. I cried I was petrified. It was dark I decided to sleep and hope that I would find mum tomorrow.
Ahhhh that sleep was so good a snow flake beside me told me it was morning. I looked to see who that kind snow flake was, it was Kevin my best friend Kevin. We looked around there was a brown, old, snowy house. Some hideous life forms had just popped out of the musty old home. They scooped up Kevin and a bunch of others WHAT WAS HAPPINING? They placed Kevin and the others into a round ball and hit his family with it. I knew I would be next so I dug through everybody until I reached the grass I laidon the wet, long, cold grass hoping I wouldn’t be killed like Kevin.
I was laying on the grass stillbut what happened to everybody on top of me were they already dead? They can’t be. I became to get lifted above the air “AAAAAHHHHHHH” I screeched in horror. I was terrified they placed me on a big snowball and started rolling me around everywhere, the rolling stopped. A dog came along an lifted its leg, what was it doing was it playing a game? Suddenly it let out a yellow liquid substance on to us all lucky for me it only got my leg. I crawled into the middle of the ball hoping it was safer. Somebody started to call my name, MUM IT WAS MUM. I ran over to her in hope when suddenly the boy threw the ball SPLAT now my life is over. I never got to see my mum I hope she survived.
As I drop to the ground, I am covered by my other snowflakes friends. I soon realize that I am at the bottom, im covered, I can’t breathe, I can see. Nothing, it’s like I have no senses, it’s like I died. But then the sun strikes through, im not dead.
But I am getting smashed against other snowflakes, then bang, im alone we are all split up, and we are all broken, injured and hurting but then I realize im not its everyone else. But then, it’s not over, more crashes more bangs.
I close my eyes and think that when the sun comes out my life is over, but before that what I really want is to be in a snowman, most snowflakes want to be left alone to them selves and melt peacefully but that is not me. I want to be at the very top, looking at the family and getting a photo taken and being remembered. Then I open my eyes and I see a flash, wow im at the top of a beautiful snowman. Im going to be remembered I think, as the next few hours will be my last.
Then it snow more and more and more. I can’t believe it, it’s a miracle, I can live a long then all of a sudden a huge gust of wind, pulled apart from all my friends. The wind blows me all over town over every single house. The next day…
I scream, where am I, who, when. Then I see other snowflakes they say im at the Port Hills, wow its so beautiful, I see birds singing so softly, every snowflake is so peaceful just relaxing no bother. It’s like a holiday, my dream holiday. I love it, I don’t want to leave, all you do is sleep, sit and do nothing its so nice. But then the sun rises, it’s so hot; I then know that my holiday is finally over. As I melt away I wonder what form I will be next.
Snow frozen drops of water that fall from the sky in small white flakes. A snow flake is a puny white, crispy snow flake tumbling from the misty blue sky as it drops into my warm hand, I can feel the light weight on my hand, the coldness and the penetrating snow starting to fall out of the sky. I could see thousands of tiny snow flakes descending from the miserable clouds as if the snow was like white candy floss, a person ripping it into pieces and dropping it down to earth.
The hard solid ground was starting to fill with untouched snow so I decided to keep my two hands stuck together and half leaving them opened. Heaps and heaps of snow was filling my hands. I formed it into a snowball, and chucked it to a brown wooden fence. The hard wind hit my face. The cold hard capful of wind stopped, and suddenly something happened to me. I was turned into a snow man, with a cozy warm scarf wrapped around my neck, and as we know I have a nose, eyes, mouth and a hat. When I’m a snow man, I don’t feel freezing or numb but I’m afraid my life will anytime end, kids will destroy me or the gleaming, capable sun melting away at me and I will soon despair and turn into water, and be lost into the drain. Helena
Today’s the day. We attack at midday when the enemy is more vulnerable and tired from building and work. I was ready. Today weather forecast is sunny, sunny and you guest it sunny. They won’t even notice our attack. Midday is here now we got in lines and rode off on clouds up to 600 ft in length. We weren’t just ordinary snow flakes, we were mutant snow flakes. We could make long porcupine quills from our bodies. Ok ok yes I agree the name is stupid. Ahhh look out here comes snow flakes. Huh my but. The other creatures our enemies were known as hipnotons they call them selves human. Huh my but twice. Any way they always win never us they shovel that horrible brackish white stuff like us but melts us we call it the acidsnowmakeranator. I’ve survived 222,222,222.222, 222,222.222, 222.222,2220 battles against them. We attacked and we won. I hit some random guys eye his name was Michael pett. I hit the ground dug under ground and re froze my self with my freezeanatoratorwator. Ann was a worm I killed her. I froze two million worms and other animals. We thought for hours and hours. Non-stop. Until a baby called Christian Adams came and ate me and six million of my fellow ameraflakes we then froze the child hipnoton from the inside out and survived we melted ourselves and evaporated into our home clouds where we re- froze ourselves. We won the war and it felt damn awesome.
snowy, windy every day is cold and fun. my smolest sister were playig at out side. she made a big snowman and our family. uh.. where is my second sister? she was making a snow cake with flowers.. yum.. oops... sorry, I was just think about what I need to make and then my anty come to me and say 'how about making a snowman?' but I was already made lots of snowmans...so I told her no!!!!!! and she told me another idea and that was perfact and awsome, igloo!! why didn't I think about igloo!!! so.. me and my sisters were make big igloo and that was good and when we finished make igloo I was go in side and make some stuff at there it's looks like a house^*^ my sisters were get flowere at there and it make me really sad because floweres are make igloo dirtyㅠㅠ so I told them to stop and don't do that again,, and they stop and they stop. when we stop make our cloths was wet and dirty and cold so we come inside of house quick and take some food to eat and we was sleep. At the morning it was raining out side and our igloo was almost gone.. so we were take photo fast and sleep again and I think that seems to bo like a long dream. -ann-
And my sisters were always sad about the igloo but it has been make one time? and they were upset about igloo is gone,,, and my anty was so glad about the all the snow is gone after all she hate snow and she hate wet day but she look sad when she saw sisters.-ann-
The cycle of life .You are born, you live, and you die. This just repeats and repeats over and over again. Sort of like a bit of water vapour in Queenstown. “That is me” a mutated snow flake. I was mutated by nuclear radiation when I was in U.S.A. Me and many of my mates are the same and we fall at 50km downward. My puny, rock solid, white, deadly body just falls to earth and ((BANG)). I awaken in Queenstown on the top of 4 square. I struggle to the top of the pile.
At the top of the pile I wait to melt first and drip down off the 4 square supermarket and into a river. In the river I kill a few fish and storm down it for a long 3 hours until ((AAARRRGGG)). “What’s this?” I just fell down a deep steep water fall into a lake. The lake was massive about 2000x1000 I just floated across the lake aimless lost without Carrie. Nah I’m joking I’m joking. I’m water I don’t need anybody. No one at all. The only 2 connections we make are in the clouds on the ground.
After 3 long days I finally? A. die B.soak C.evaporate. C is correct. This takes an hour to perform, it starts with you floating then you get hot (not to say I already wasn’t). All of a sudden you are going 100km right for a suicidal run to the clouds. ((WOOOOSH)) like a rocket. When you get there you get given a nice Luke warm cuppa tea with a few biscuits. After about a week we all just run down the sky in rain in Grey mouth. A similar process is at hand and we all have fun. It is always like that with us water vapour until we find Mt Everest. The same thing happens over and over again. UNTIL…
…I’m in a dessert alone how did I get like this???
One bright cheerful day and then it starts to DRIP DROP DRIP DROP ohh no!! It’s a storm. White things began to fall from the bright clear sky. Everything started to change, the clear blue sky changed to a grey cold sky with rain, snow, and hail falling from above. You walk towards your door and go outside. Fog everywhere you go. The fog starts to disappear as you begin to see white all over your yard. Something falls down from the above onto your hands. More and more coming from the above covering up your hands with its soft beautiful icy feeling, causing your hands to freeze.
As you watch the spookiness of the sky you see billions of snowflakes falling down to earth. One snowflake has caught your attention, as your eyes is mostly interested in its creative shape. You look around to the other snowflakes (they are all the same shape).One snowflake, with its creative shape soft edges and its beautiful colouring falls upon your head. Waiting to be formed onto a snowball ready to have a snowball fight. You feel as if this snowflake is a very magical one, you feel as if it is very exceptional. “Crunch, crunch” away the snow crunches as you step all over its softness.
You feel as if you are about to fall in love with this snowflake as you stare at its creative, beautiful shape sitting on your hand, slipping through your fingers waiting to be free. As you set it free it starts to melt away into the ground burred under the soft soft beautiful layers of the sow, making the layers thicker and thicker. A few days later all the snow melts away leaving the imaginative shaped snowflake behind, leaving you with that special feeling once again as you watch its softness melt into the ground.
“Mum do I have to jump”? Yes and very shortly too son But NO Buts, now are you geared up? Yes! Now were am I landing”? Ready Jump! My mum my mum pushed me off my silky soft cloud as well as my two brothers Snotty and Scotty, they are twins, so I charge down passion and with a thrill, I ask my brothers where are we going to land? And they said mum told us that we are going to land on a huge red and yellow thing ‘Red and Yellow’? I have a quick think on were we might land but sill have no clue? I have a quick look around and see that there’s of us all around and think about my mum and my little sister Sammy and my little brother James, my Dad left when I was a little Snowflake.
We are now reaching 2000, 0 meters before landing. I had a feeling that I wont be able to come back to mum But then suddenly the big, bright orange thing came out Of the distance, my mum told me a lot about the bright thing she said he was named Sun, or something like that, she also said that he was the brightest beast Or creature ever named well something like that. He blinded me, An I was stunned by his brightness I thought “is this the end, the end of my life?” I couldn’t see for a while but then an enormous black cloud covered the bright beast, I wake up and feel normal again, I look down then suddenly I charge, charge like nothing ever before, I try to charge faster and then my brothers Snotty and Scotty give me a big push, I can feel the cold wind push against me, but it don’t faze me, and then the lute net says “2 minutes before our destination boys so get ready for landing” My stomach fills with excitement.
Then we all pull our parachutes, I look for the big Red and Yellow thing but I cant find it, but then at the corner of my eyes, I see the huge Red and Yellow Thing but it has a big M on it. And then we land , I think to my self “is that it?”….then from the distance I see all of these kids come out of nowhere then I see my friend Jeff get pick up an got made in to a ball with my friends, and then he gets thrown up beside me hey buddy.
So that brings us to the end of my Amazing Adventure Klayton Waikato
Life couldn't have been more simpler than this I thought,as I gazed with a cheeky smile at all the tiny snowflakes melting with fear,not ready for another snow storm.I just ignored them,turned around and made my glorious dive,the dive that I thought would led me to a great and enjoyable life.I drifted in the cool night breeze,letting the slow gentle wave of wind take me away. After years I had finally left the warmth of my nest,the softness of the clouds. I began to flout to the surface,I could only just make out the outlines of the cities.I knew where I was heading to,a fresh island covered in green scenery. I swiftly moved around, heading for the wavy shores of clean and green New Zealand. I could ride whales in the beautiful shores of Kaikoura,diving in and out of the clear water, glistening in the sunlight.I could make new and wonderful friends at fox glacier,where it streams with cold icy waters,but instead I drifted past these exciting places.A couple of long,boring hours latter,I reached my destination.Landing in a place I thought was warm,fluffy and delightful,not knowing it would led me to my death.I wounderd were I was.A place with little flees crawling everywhere,a soft purring sounding pass my ears leaving me to wonder.oh no,a little to the left and a bit to the right,the ground had suddenly started to move.rumbling and trembling it shock in a horrifying way,knocking me over the bumpy edge.Once again I was in the air screaming and shouting,but it was to late....splat!!!! Sohillah
A while ago my mum was fluffing me up and dusting me down so I was a nice white shade and I departed my home, and as I fall I begin to get worried and I can see puffy white clouds that I’m descending on I thought I would land but I didn’t and I ripped a hole in the fluff and I continued to fall. Helplessly I struggled and squirmed only to land with a puff on something extremely cold and wet “oh it’s grass” I shouted in relief but then the end started coming as a soggy gumboot shadows over me…
I close my eyes and hope to be safe and my little flake leg gets caught and I get flung into the frosty air and I land on a strand of silky hair “thank goodness I landed safely” I announced because I was lucky. Wait … what FINGER!! “Stanley noooooooooo!” I watch in horror as Stanley gets shoved up a gigantic nose and rubbed of down the other end (I think im scarred for life) , now seeing the danger I cling for my life and as I prey to mum and dad I spot a table and I decide to take the leap of faith and I land on a snowflake just like me … exactly like me? Oh that’s what it is , it’s a glass table and that snow flake is me so I glance at my reflection and I see a distressed snowflake shaking in horror as my friends transform into water and go to the ‘flakeygates.’
Then I get a drip on me and a shiver goes down my spineless back, I slowly look up and I see a huge dog drooling on me and I squint to read his collar “Snarler” not good! And then I run as fast as a little piece of shaggy , melting snow can and I fall and get stepped on but I was protected by other snowflakes and I get blown away from the danger in a big gust of wind and I see a hideous face and I land on a overhanging pimple - disgusting - but I'm alive!
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P.S I also put together a picture but i cant insert it.
Cold, frozen, tiny. Weeee I’m a super hero, I’m flying wee bang. Man that hurt. Wow I’m on top of a school with a lot of other friends as well. I look down and I see almost 300 kids having a snow fight. Good thing im on top of the school. Ouch that’s got to hurt, I just saw someone get hit in the face. Everyone is dressed up nice and warm. I swear that kid has 10 layers of jackets on. Their teacher looks very harmful and very mean. I am laying on a soft bed made out of snow. All my siblings are under me. My dad is shouting get off me do you know how much you weigh. Then I reply with a smart comment that is very naughty. So I just carried on chilling and watching kids get smacked in the face by snow balls. Then a huge rugby ball lands right beside me. So then the rugby boys ask the care taker if he could go up and get it, so the care taker climbed up a ladder and kicked down the rugby ball and at the same time he kicked me down as well. Ouch !!! , you care takers are really inconsiderate of others. No don’t pee on me doggy please, oh no now I’m all yellow. I saw kids look at me and think to themselves ‘man what happened to this snowflake’. I was yelling ‘what are you looking at!!’, then I realise that they cant hear me so they carried on looking at me. I got a huge fright when the bell rung. Then I saw all the kids stop playing with each other then suddenly they ran as fast as they could to get back in to class.
Monday morning....wssshhhh..Yeey,atlas i'm back.It was a cold freezing morning I was on the side of an enormouse chimney.Woosshhh the wind blows ahh help i'm falling down boom!!!Ouch...I bump on the ground,wow it's wonderful in here I could see a huge house and it is a pretty house.Step,step,step who's that,there are three kids walking through the gate I wanted to play with them but I can't i'm just a white crunchy snowflake poor me...Mean while when I was looking through all around the place suddenly someone pick me up and threw,I thought I was flying and then...awww,ahhh I was on someones face yuuck ugly.Suddenly I bump down....what!!i'm now on the road.
Splat,squash,smash....oh no!!!i'm now full of mud because of this damn car yuck.Then suddenly one car drag me through by the wheel and take me through their house and I saw my friends the humans made them snowman poor them...Later on I was beside the tree starring at their house suddenly Drip Drop..the rain falls oh gosh im melting...noohhhh...tic tic tic yeey it's snowing again i'm back...After that I was rolling through the snowman and now i'm with my friends I have never talk to them before but now i'm already here.We are talking for a long time and then suddenly someone take me and the crunch crunch ahh i don't wanna be eaten by these gross mouth and then I was very lucky me I escaped but now i'm wet I need to go to the fridge to get froze again but how?Yes I got an idea...I roll through their house and then go to the fridge.I was stuck on the fish I saw a women and grab the fish I was over there and the women put some water on the fish and then I fell over into the sink and drag me unto the sink plug....nooohh...I want to be snowflake again help somebooody.
Thanks Olivia for trying to put a picture on the blog - I will show you how to do this at school on Monday. Really impressed with the imagery and creativeness of everyone's entries so far this week - remember you can give feedback to your peers also. Happy blogging team! Mrs Y :-)
As I stared as a drop of water in the middle of a desert the sun was bursting straight in my face. Then I started to fell really light but some way I started to melt. So I started to cry every time I would cry I would become bigger and bigger then I stopped crying then I was still melting so I sang this is the end my only lonely friend. But I didn't see that I was becoming a gas flying through the air. I saw lots of other gases in the air. I asked one of the gases where are we going he said to the clouds where the gods are it take a few minutes to get to the clouds but it was ok. I reached the clouds and we all joined together to keep warm. As the hours past more and more gases joined a group of clouds and all so four planes a space ship went through us. The god yelled out drop so we all dropped.Where is the landing a snow flake said New Zealand. I keep looking back to find that i was at the back of the pack. We were five kilometre away from Christchurch to find myself a crystal flake flooting in the air. Than i landed on top of a car it was dark and i was alone. So i went to sleep i woke up and snow was all around me. Someone sprayed water on the car and someone started the car. Every piece of snow was gone a child pick me up and rolled me. I was no longer snow flake the child put in a chilly bin. I don't know why he did but i was ok with it. In the car i could feel all the bends,corner,straight and stop. The chilly bin was open i was pick up and place under the tree. My friends and family where all happy to see me and one person from my family was gone my mum I asked my friend drop where she was he tuned around there was a droplet of water. know one saw that the sun come behind us now there is one big pond there now.
(Plane flying) "HOORAY!" I'm on my way to Cambodia."What the?, this isn't Cambodia,it's.....NZ!" I guess the plane driver is an idiotic, don't know where he's driving. "Where do you think your going?" "Uhhh...NZ" replied the pilot.
The big, white, vanilla flake was psycho, so he jumped out of the plane and put on his parachute. Afterwards he landed in CHCH (Christchurch) on the mountains. OMG! one of his bits got chipped of, but he's still breathing. (how fascinating). It is 8:30pm and Snowflake is looking for food....1 hour later, and he still can't find the god damn food. (How heroic.) Finally he found food, just one Trout fish. 7am, he woke up and saw the city, lots of damage, due to the earthquake. This is kinda like Man Vs Wild. And so he went to the city, suddenly, there was another 8.0 magnitude earthquake, now he is stuck, he called for help but no one helped him because nobody can hear him, it feels like somebody gave him a sleeping pill. 6 hours later he is still ALIVE! (unbelievable) but he is in a real pain, so this guy named Vehar saw Snowflake. "My hero." Panicked Snowflake.
1 hour later, his hero took snowflake to his house to heal him up, like healing the world, and make it a better place. Since Snowflake got injured, Vehar didn't know what to do."Vehar? are you rich?"said Snowflake. "What do you think?" Afterwards Snowflake thanked Vehar, and so he went back to the mountain. 5 hours later..he's looking for food again. He caught a Salmon fish. The next day he called for help. 3 hours later, he saw a helicopter, he put the sign S.O.S (save our solves). Vehar called the helicopter to help him (how nice he is.) P.S Snowflake is a Terminator. Vehar ;) 319 word limit
Snow time … Shiver shake, drip drop, I slide into the frosty fresh air. My face turns as pink as my mum’s precious flowers. As I fall on the soft white fluffy snow, and as I slowly pick my head off the wet and annoying cold snow. I feel a big chill run through my body and yet … still loving every moment of it.
I feel my hands freeze up, as I pick up the whitest snow ball , I curl it up with my hands and aim at my brother, he’s really not in the mood for a snow ball fight right now. I tuck my hands in my very tiny pockets to warm them up, I try to move them but yet my hands remain as cold as ice cubes. My family and I prepare to make a snow man, but the snow is still flattered on the ground. We gather as much snow as we can into a humongous pile, nearly taking all the snow off the back yard.
Mum gets to cold so she goes in side , barely making it with her numb legs, trying to race in side. There is still my two brothers, Leela Grace and myself. I go off and look for decorations to put on our snow man well they do all the hard work. My brother Richard and I fight with laughter well my other brother Tonga yells at both of us to stop it! We look at each other and smile.
The journey of snow, flying through the fresh frosty air putting chills in warm innocent bodies. Each time a little piece falls from the sky makes it look like heaven has come to earth. Every time a child plays in the snow he or she is as cold as a freezer but is very happy as a child should be and every snow man made it is completed with love, care and joy …
Snow time … Shiver shake, drip drop, I slide into the frosty fresh air. My face turns as pink as my mum’s precious flowers. As I fall on the soft white fluffy snow, and as I slowly pick my head off the wet and annoying cold snow. I feel a big chill run through my body and yet … still loving every moment of it.
I feel my hands freeze up, as I pick up the whitest snow ball , I curl it up with my hands and aim at my brother, he’s really not in the mood for a snow ball fight right now. I tuck my hands in my very tiny pockets to warm them up, I try to move them but yet my hands remain as cold as ice cubes. My family and I prepare to make a snow man, but the snow is still flattered on the ground. We gather as much snow as we can into a humongous pile, nearly taking all the snow off the back yard.
The journey of snow, flying through the fresh frosty air, putting chills in innocent bodies. Ever time a little piece falls from the sky it looks like heaven has come to earth. Every time a child plays in the snow he or she is cold but happy as a child should be. Every time a snow man is made it should be made with care and joy…
Snowy day sleeping on my soft ,silky queen bed, my window was open that time a gentle and smooth flake hit my face, I woke up, it was just a flake of snow but it keeps hitting me when I go to sleep. Wherever I go the snow flake keeps following me I just don’t know why. I played with my friends happily at the park then one of my friend said turn around I have a special gift for you but it wasn’t and they all through the snow at my face I was so angry at them.
All of us were playing fun and enjoying games everywhere. I felt sorry for the snow flake because she didn’t have any friends to play with so I went up to the snow flake and said hi, but the snow wasn’t talking, she felt so sad and lonely that’s why she was following me around. But the greatest thing was the snowflake can talk I was so happy that she can talk. She asked me if she wanted to be my friend and I said sure you can be my friend because I felt so sorry for her. She had a smile on her face when I said I will be your friend.
The snow flake showed me to all different kind of places where the snow were the snow were so wonderful, one of the places their was a big as snow ball at the front of a school, all of the kids were still rowing the snow ball, it was gnomons. I just cant believe it they can make that gnomons snow ball but it was only little tiny kids I was so amazed they can make it so big….WOW!!!!!. The snow flake was so nice to me and she so a quite snow flake. But some of the snow flakes came back down and my snow flake had a lot of friends to play with everyday. She was so pleased that I was her friend when she was alone they all went bake where they came from and she was safe. I had a tear on my eye then I raced back home and went under my blanket because it was so cold outside. I ended up at my bed sleeping.
My Journey
ReplyDeleteI floated through the thick misty air and glided effortlessly with the wind. My delicate features remained stable as I peacefully made my journey down. The scenery was breath-taking and through the crispy air, I could see a bizarre snowman wearing a snug scarf and grasping a cup of hot chocolate with two delightful marshmallows tucked inside as if it were a bed. Wait, oops! Silly me it wasn’t a snowman, but an ordinary man going out for an evening stroll with fallen snow inside his fashionable fedora. I smiled to myself and looked up at the night sky. My fellow snowflakes were charging behind me, but beyond that the stars were shimmering. They seemed to be so elegant, so graceful and I was envious. They lived for billions of years while snowflakes only lived for a day; maybe two. Also they were so radiant and eye catching, one could not help but admire them. But then, I remembered that we snowflakes bring joy to children. We make them happy. So with that thought I was satisfied and I could see below me that my journey was coming to an end. I gently landed on the petal of a pleasant flower and closed my eyes, wondering whether I would come back as a raindrop or a hailstone.
Huh? I opened my eyes to find myself in a large white space with clustered ice stuck to the sides, a fridge! Also, a young boy with a guilty looking face was peering down at me. I understood what was going on almost immediately; snowflakes are clever little beings y’know! The boy did not desire for the snow to end and had preserved me in his freezer; it was understandable and I didn’t really mind. So here I am now writing this in my diary, life is pretty good in a fridge!
311words Jamin (=
Wow! Awesome effort Jamin - great imagery used in your description. Happy to see the cheerful ending - there could be a part 2! Keep warm and encourage family members and friends to comment or write their own entry. Take care and keep warm. Mrs Y :-)
ReplyDeleteWell done Jamin - yet another great piece of writing. Wonderful use of imagery. Keep up the great work (and making Mrs Y smile). Mr Y
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ReplyDeleteSwish. I’m floating, slowly floating towards a small beautiful country it’s called New York, Yip heading towards New York. Oh no I read wrong I’m heading towards New Zealand. It looks wonderful almost like a wonderland! I’m finally here after my cold freezing journey I’m finally here! When I fell I landed on a huge yellow houses roof their were five girls playing outside, they came and picked up a huge bunch of my crisp lumpy friends and took a enormous bite out of them, four or five minuets later they were all gone! Out of sight! After that they all when inside and one hour later they came out side again! They picked up more of my soft white delicate friends squashed them and twisted them into a ball I didn’t want to look but… I did, she held the ball of my friends up and threw it and another girl that girl threw one at the other girl and that went on for ten minuets! It looked so fun I wanted to play but they didn’t touch me!
Oh damn I’ve died melted, it’s all black I can’t see a thing. Now I have to wait another four years to be reborn. Heey you shhhh they are coming! Who’s coming? The kids they are coming to play with us, now shhhh! I could here them running down the hallway putting on their warm clothes! They opened the door and ran out. I can’t wait shhhh they’re here! Today there were four little girls. The youngest ran out and started doing millions of star angels, the second youngest went out and body slammed into the snow, the second oldest started clearing snow of the three cars and the oldest ran out it shorts and stockings and she was screaming, today I knew I would get played with I just did! They all started making those balls of snow again and throwing it at each other, they were very creative and made chairs and igloos they were amazing! But I didn’t get touched not once not even looked at, now I’m an icicle hanging off their roof sad and lonely. Oh wait someone’s coming act cool, they grabbed me yeah I’m getting played with but what I just got dipped in some yellow liquid and ate me. A few days later I woke up in a white pond and no a tsunami wait I’m not in a pond I’m in a BLUB BLUB BLUB!
By Kris Words:416
A snowflakes life is tiny, they come and go, nobody really understands them.
ReplyDeleteI opened my eyes I was soaring at one hundred feet, as I fell I chanted in terror “WHERE IS MY MUM?”
It was gloomy when I finally reached the ground, the other snow flakes cushioned my fall. The wind blew on my face “where am I?” I had yelled . Nobody answered - dead silence. My mummy was gone. I cried I was petrified. It was dark I decided to sleep and hope that I would find mum tomorrow.
Ahhhh that sleep was so good a snow flake beside me told me it was morning. I looked to see who that kind snow flake was, it was Kevin my best friend Kevin. We looked around there was a brown, old, snowy house. Some hideous life forms had just popped out of the musty old home. They scooped up Kevin and a bunch of others WHAT WAS HAPPINING? They placed Kevin and the others into a round ball and hit his family with it. I knew I would be next so I dug through everybody until I reached the grass I laidon the wet, long, cold grass hoping I wouldn’t be killed like Kevin.
I was laying on the grass stillbut what happened to everybody on top of me were they already dead? They can’t be. I became to get lifted above the air “AAAAAHHHHHHH” I screeched in horror.
I was terrified they placed me on a big snowball and started rolling me around everywhere, the rolling stopped. A dog came along an lifted its leg, what was it doing was it playing a game? Suddenly it let out a yellow liquid substance on to us all lucky for me it only got my leg. I crawled into the middle of the ball hoping it was safer. Somebody started to call my name, MUM IT WAS MUM. I ran over to her in hope when suddenly the boy threw the ball SPLAT now my life is over. I never got to see my mum I hope she survived.
Keziah =) 353 words
The Day of a snowflake
ReplyDeleteAs I drop to the ground, I am covered by my other snowflakes friends. I soon realize that I am at the bottom, im covered, I can’t breathe, I can see. Nothing, it’s like I have no senses, it’s like I died. But then the sun strikes through, im not dead.
But I am getting smashed against other snowflakes, then bang, im alone we are all split up, and we are all broken, injured and hurting but then I realize im not its everyone else. But then, it’s not over, more crashes more bangs.
I close my eyes and think that when the sun comes out my life is over, but before that what I really want is to be in a snowman, most snowflakes want to be left alone to them selves and melt peacefully but that is not me. I want to be at the very top, looking at the family and getting a photo taken and being remembered. Then I open my eyes and I see a flash, wow im at the top of a beautiful snowman. Im going to be remembered I think, as the next few hours will be my last.
Then it snow more and more and more. I can’t believe it, it’s a miracle, I can live a long then all of a sudden a huge gust of wind, pulled apart from all my friends. The wind blows me all over town over every single house. The next day…
I scream, where am I, who, when. Then I see other snowflakes they say im at the Port Hills, wow its so beautiful, I see birds singing so softly, every snowflake is so peaceful just relaxing no bother. It’s like a holiday, my dream holiday. I love it, I don’t want to leave, all you do is sleep, sit and do nothing its so nice. But then the sun rises, it’s so hot; I then know that my holiday is finally over. As I melt away I wonder what form I will be next.
Brianna
346 words
Snow frozen drops of water that fall from the sky in small white flakes. A snow flake is a puny white, crispy snow flake tumbling from the misty blue sky as it drops into my warm hand, I can feel the light weight on my hand, the coldness and the penetrating snow starting to fall out of the sky. I could see thousands of tiny snow flakes descending from the miserable clouds as if the snow was like white candy floss, a person ripping it into pieces and dropping it down to earth.
ReplyDeleteThe hard solid ground was starting to fill with untouched snow so I decided to keep my two hands stuck together and half leaving them opened. Heaps and heaps of snow was filling my hands. I formed it into a snowball, and chucked it to a brown wooden fence. The hard wind hit my face. The cold hard capful of wind stopped, and suddenly something happened to me. I was turned into a snow man, with a cozy warm scarf wrapped around my neck, and as we know I have a nose, eyes, mouth and a hat. When I’m a snow man, I don’t feel freezing or numb but I’m afraid my life will anytime end, kids will destroy me or the gleaming, capable sun melting away at me and I will soon despair and turn into water, and be lost into the drain.
Helena
Today’s the day. We attack at midday when the enemy is more vulnerable and tired from building and work. I was ready. Today weather forecast is sunny, sunny and you guest it sunny. They won’t even notice our attack. Midday is here now we got in lines and rode off on clouds up to 600 ft in length. We weren’t just ordinary snow flakes, we were mutant snow flakes. We could make long porcupine quills from our bodies. Ok ok yes I agree the name is stupid. Ahhh look out here comes snow flakes. Huh my but. The other creatures our enemies were known as hipnotons they call them selves human. Huh my but twice. Any way they always win never us they shovel that horrible brackish white stuff like us but melts us we call it the acidsnowmakeranator. I’ve survived 222,222,222.222, 222,222.222, 222.222,2220 battles against them. We attacked and we won. I hit some random guys eye his name was Michael pett. I hit the ground dug under ground and re froze my self with my freezeanatoratorwator. Ann was a worm I killed her. I froze two million worms and other animals. We thought for hours and hours. Non-stop. Until a baby called Christian Adams came and ate me and six million of my fellow ameraflakes we then froze the child hipnoton from the inside out and survived we melted ourselves and evaporated into our home clouds where we re- froze ourselves. We won the war and it felt damn awesome.
ReplyDeletesnowy, windy every day is cold and fun.
ReplyDeletemy smolest sister were playig at out side. she made a big snowman and our family. uh.. where is my second sister? she was making a snow cake with flowers.. yum.. oops... sorry, I was just think about what I need to make and then my anty come to me and say 'how about making a snowman?' but I was already made lots of snowmans...so I told her no!!!!!! and she told me another idea and that was perfact and awsome, igloo!!
why didn't I think about igloo!!! so.. me and my sisters were make big igloo and that was good and when we finished make igloo I was go in side and make some stuff at there it's looks like a house^*^ my sisters were get flowere at there and it make me really sad because floweres are make igloo dirtyㅠㅠ so I told them to stop and don't do that again,, and they stop and they stop. when we stop make our cloths was wet and dirty and cold so we come inside of house quick and take some food to eat and we was sleep. At the morning it was raining out side and our igloo was almost gone..
so we were take photo fast and sleep again and I think that seems to bo like a long dream. -ann-
And my sisters were always sad about the igloo but it has been make one time? and they were upset about igloo is gone,,, and my anty was so glad about the all the snow is gone after all she hate snow and she hate wet day but she look sad when she saw sisters.-ann-
ReplyDeleteThe cycle of life .You are born, you live, and you die. This just repeats and repeats over and over again. Sort of like a bit of water vapour in Queenstown. “That is me” a mutated snow flake. I was mutated by nuclear radiation when I was in U.S.A. Me and many of my mates are the same and we fall at 50km downward. My puny, rock solid, white, deadly body just falls to earth and ((BANG)). I awaken in Queenstown on the top of 4 square. I struggle to the top of the pile.
ReplyDeleteAt the top of the pile I wait to melt first and drip down off the 4 square supermarket and into a river. In the river I kill a few fish and storm down it for a long 3 hours until ((AAARRRGGG)). “What’s this?” I just fell down a deep steep water fall into a lake. The lake was massive about 2000x1000 I just floated across the lake aimless lost without Carrie. Nah I’m joking I’m joking. I’m water I don’t need anybody. No one at all. The only 2 connections we make are in the clouds on the ground.
After 3 long days I finally? A. die B.soak C.evaporate. C is correct. This takes an hour to perform, it starts with you floating then you get hot (not to say I already wasn’t). All of a sudden you are going 100km right for a suicidal run to the clouds. ((WOOOOSH)) like a rocket. When you get there you get given a nice Luke warm cuppa tea with a few biscuits. After about a week we all just run down the sky in rain in Grey mouth. A similar process is at hand and we all have fun. It is always like that with us water vapour until we find Mt Everest. The same thing happens over and over again. UNTIL…
…I’m in a dessert alone how did I get like this???
cjadams212
SNOW TIME……
ReplyDeleteOne bright cheerful day and then it starts to DRIP DROP DRIP DROP ohh no!! It’s a storm. White things began to fall from the bright clear sky. Everything started to change, the clear blue sky changed to a grey cold sky with rain, snow, and hail falling from above. You walk towards your door and go outside. Fog everywhere you go. The fog starts to disappear as you begin to see white all over your yard. Something falls down from the above onto your hands. More and more coming from the above covering up your hands with its soft beautiful icy feeling, causing your hands to freeze.
As you watch the spookiness of the sky you see billions of snowflakes falling down to earth. One snowflake has caught your attention, as your eyes is mostly interested in its creative shape. You look around to the other snowflakes (they are all the same shape).One snowflake, with its creative shape soft edges and its beautiful colouring falls upon your head. Waiting to be formed onto a snowball ready to have a snowball fight. You feel as if this snowflake is a very magical one, you feel as if it is very exceptional. “Crunch, crunch” away the snow crunches as you step all over its softness.
You feel as if you are about to fall in love with this snowflake as you stare at its creative, beautiful shape sitting on your hand, slipping through your fingers waiting to be free. As you set it free it starts to melt away into the ground burred under the soft soft beautiful layers of the sow, making the layers thicker and thicker. A few days later all the snow melts away leaving the imaginative shaped snowflake behind, leaving you with that special feeling once again as you watch its softness melt into the ground.
Nuusila
Words 311
Journey of the Snowflake
ReplyDelete“Mum do I have to jump”?
Yes and very shortly too son But
NO Buts, now are you geared up? Yes! Now were am
I landing”? Ready Jump! My mum my mum pushed me off my silky soft cloud as well as my two brothers Snotty and Scotty, they are twins, so I charge down passion and with a thrill, I ask my brothers where are we going to land? And they said mum told us that we are going to land on a huge red and yellow thing ‘Red and Yellow’? I have a quick think on were we might land but sill have no clue? I have a quick look around
and see that there’s of us all around and think about my mum and my little sister Sammy and my little brother James, my Dad left when I was a little Snowflake.
We are now reaching 2000, 0 meters before landing. I had a feeling that I wont be able to come back to mum
But then suddenly the big, bright orange thing came out
Of the distance, my mum told me a lot about the bright thing she said he was named Sun, or something like that, she also said that he was the brightest beast
Or creature ever named well something like that.
He blinded me, An I was stunned by his brightness
I thought “is this the end, the end of my life?”
I couldn’t see for a while but then an enormous black cloud covered the bright beast, I wake up and feel normal again, I look down then suddenly I charge, charge like nothing ever before, I try to charge faster and then my brothers Snotty and Scotty give me a big push, I can feel the cold wind push against me, but it don’t faze me, and then the lute net says “2 minutes before our destination boys so get ready for landing”
My stomach fills with excitement.
Then we all pull our parachutes, I look for the big Red and Yellow thing but I cant find it, but then at the corner of my eyes, I see the huge Red and Yellow
Thing but it has a big M on it. And then we land ,
I think to my self “is that it?”….then from the distance
I see all of these kids come out of nowhere then I see my friend Jeff get pick up an got made in to a ball with my friends, and then he gets thrown up beside me hey buddy.
So that brings us to the end of my Amazing Adventure
Klayton Waikato
Life couldn't have been more simpler than this I thought,as I gazed with a cheeky smile at all the tiny snowflakes melting with fear,not ready for another snow storm.I just ignored them,turned around and made my glorious dive,the dive that I thought would led me to a great and enjoyable life.I drifted in the cool night breeze,letting the slow gentle wave of wind take me away. After years I had finally left the warmth of my nest,the softness of the clouds. I began to flout to the surface,I could only just make out the outlines of the cities.I knew where I was heading to,a fresh island covered in green scenery. I swiftly moved around, heading for the wavy shores of clean and green New Zealand. I could ride whales in the beautiful shores of Kaikoura,diving in and out of the clear water, glistening in the sunlight.I could make new and wonderful friends at fox glacier,where it streams with cold icy waters,but instead I drifted past these exciting places.A couple of long,boring hours latter,I reached my destination.Landing in a place I thought was warm,fluffy and delightful,not knowing it would led me to my death.I wounderd were I was.A place with little flees crawling everywhere,a soft purring sounding pass my ears leaving me to wonder.oh no,a little to the left and a bit to the right,the ground had suddenly started to move.rumbling and trembling it shock in a horrifying way,knocking me over the bumpy edge.Once again I was in the air screaming and shouting,but it was to late....splat!!!!
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ReplyDeleteA while ago my mum was fluffing me up and dusting me down so I was a nice white shade and I departed my home, and as I fall I begin to get worried and I can see puffy white clouds that I’m descending on I thought I would land but I didn’t and I ripped a hole in the fluff and I continued to fall. Helplessly I struggled and squirmed only to land with a puff on something extremely cold and wet “oh it’s grass” I shouted in relief but then the end started coming as a soggy gumboot shadows over me…
ReplyDeleteI close my eyes and hope to be safe and my little flake leg gets caught and I get flung into the frosty air and I land on a strand of silky hair “thank goodness I landed safely” I announced because I was lucky. Wait … what FINGER!! “Stanley noooooooooo!” I watch in horror as Stanley gets shoved up a gigantic nose and rubbed of down the other end (I think im scarred for life) , now seeing the danger I cling for my life and as I prey to mum and dad I spot a table and I decide to take the leap of faith and I land on a snowflake just like me … exactly like me? Oh that’s what it is , it’s a glass table and that snow flake is me so I glance at my reflection and I see a distressed snowflake shaking in horror as my friends transform into water and go to the ‘flakeygates.’
Then I get a drip on me and a shiver goes down my spineless back, I slowly look up and I see a huge dog drooling on me and I squint to read his collar “Snarler” not good!
And then I run as fast as a little piece of shaggy , melting snow can and I fall and get stepped on but I was protected by other snowflakes and I get blown away from the danger in a big gust of wind and I see a hideous face and I land on a overhanging pimple - disgusting - but I'm alive!
365 words
P.S I also put together a picture but i cant insert it.
i removed the first one because it had mistakes in it
ReplyDeleteCold, frozen, tiny. Weeee I’m a super hero, I’m flying wee bang. Man that hurt. Wow I’m on top of a school with a lot of other friends as well. I look down and I see almost 300 kids having a snow fight. Good thing im on top of the school. Ouch that’s got to hurt, I just saw someone get hit in the face. Everyone is dressed up nice and warm. I swear that kid has 10 layers of jackets on. Their teacher looks very harmful and very mean. I am laying on a soft bed made out of snow. All my siblings are under me. My dad is shouting get off me do you know how much you weigh. Then I reply with a smart comment that is very naughty. So I just carried on chilling and watching kids get smacked in the face by snow balls. Then a huge rugby ball lands right beside me. So then the rugby boys ask the care taker if he could go up and get it, so the care taker climbed up a ladder and kicked down the rugby ball and at the same time he kicked me down as well. Ouch !!! , you care takers are really inconsiderate of others. No don’t pee on me doggy please, oh no now I’m all yellow. I saw kids look at me and think to themselves ‘man what happened to this snowflake’. I was yelling ‘what are you looking at!!’, then I realise that they cant hear me so they carried on looking at me. I got a huge fright when the bell rung. Then I saw all the kids stop playing with each other then suddenly they ran as fast as they could to get back in to class.
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sorry i didnt get it into paragraphs
ReplyDeleteMonday morning....wssshhhh..Yeey,atlas i'm back.It was a cold freezing morning I was on the side of an enormouse chimney.Woosshhh the wind blows ahh help i'm falling down boom!!!Ouch...I bump on the ground,wow it's wonderful in here I could see a huge house and it is a pretty house.Step,step,step who's that,there are three kids walking through the gate I wanted to play with them but I can't i'm just a white crunchy snowflake poor me...Mean while when I was looking through all around the place suddenly someone pick me up and threw,I thought I was flying and then...awww,ahhh I was on someones face yuuck ugly.Suddenly I bump down....what!!i'm now on the road.
ReplyDeleteSplat,squash,smash....oh no!!!i'm now full of mud because of this damn car yuck.Then suddenly one car drag me through by the wheel and take me through their house and I saw my friends the humans made them snowman poor them...Later on I was beside the tree starring at their house suddenly Drip Drop..the rain falls oh gosh im melting...noohhhh...tic tic tic yeey it's snowing again i'm back...After that I was rolling through the snowman and now i'm with my friends I have never talk to them before but now i'm already here.We are talking for a long time and then suddenly someone take me and the crunch crunch ahh i don't wanna be eaten by these gross mouth and then I was very lucky me I escaped but now i'm wet I need to go to the fridge to get froze again but how?Yes I got an idea...I roll through their house and then go to the fridge.I was stuck on the fish I saw a women and grab the fish I was over there and the women put some water on the fish and then I fell over into the sink and drag me unto the sink plug....nooohh...I want to be snowflake again help somebooody.
By:Micah
Thanks Olivia for trying to put a picture on the blog - I will show you how to do this at school on Monday. Really impressed with the imagery and creativeness of everyone's entries so far this week - remember you can give feedback to your peers also. Happy blogging team! Mrs Y :-)
ReplyDeleteAs I stared as a drop of water in the middle of a desert the sun was bursting straight in my face. Then I started to fell really light but some way I started to melt. So I started to cry every time I would cry I would become bigger and bigger then I stopped crying then I was still melting so I sang this is the end my only lonely friend. But I didn't see that I was becoming a gas flying through the air. I saw lots of other gases in the air. I asked one of the gases where are we going he said to the clouds where the gods are it take a few minutes to get to the clouds but it was ok. I reached the clouds and we all joined together to keep warm. As the hours past more and more gases joined a group of clouds and all so four planes a space ship went through us. The god yelled out drop so we all dropped.Where is the landing a snow flake said New Zealand. I keep looking back to find that i was at the back of the pack. We were five kilometre away from Christchurch to find myself a crystal flake flooting in the air. Than i landed on top of a car it was dark and i was alone. So i went to sleep i woke up and snow was all around me. Someone sprayed water on the car and someone started the car. Every piece of snow was gone a child pick me up and rolled me. I was no longer snow flake the child put in a chilly bin. I don't know why he did but i was ok with it. In the car i could feel all the bends,corner,straight and stop. The chilly bin was open i was pick up and place under the tree. My friends and family where all happy to see me and one person from my family was gone my mum I asked my friend drop where she was he tuned around there was a droplet of water. know one saw that the sun come behind us now there is one big pond there now.
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(Plane flying) "HOORAY!" I'm on my way to Cambodia."What the?, this isn't Cambodia,it's.....NZ!" I guess the plane driver is an idiotic, don't know where he's driving. "Where do you think your going?" "Uhhh...NZ" replied the pilot.
ReplyDeleteThe big, white, vanilla flake was psycho, so he jumped out of the plane and put on his parachute. Afterwards he landed in CHCH (Christchurch) on the mountains. OMG! one of his bits got chipped of, but he's still breathing. (how fascinating). It is 8:30pm and Snowflake is looking for food....1 hour later, and he still can't find the god damn food. (How heroic.) Finally he found food, just one Trout fish. 7am, he woke up and saw the city, lots of damage, due to the earthquake. This is kinda like Man Vs Wild. And so he went to the city, suddenly, there was another 8.0 magnitude earthquake, now he is stuck, he called for help but no one helped him because nobody can hear him, it feels like somebody gave him a sleeping pill. 6 hours later he is still ALIVE! (unbelievable) but he is in a real pain, so this guy named Vehar saw Snowflake. "My hero." Panicked Snowflake.
1 hour later, his hero took snowflake to his house to heal him up, like healing the world, and make it a better place. Since Snowflake got injured, Vehar didn't know what to do."Vehar? are you rich?"said Snowflake. "What do you think?" Afterwards Snowflake thanked Vehar, and so he went back to the mountain. 5 hours later..he's looking for food again. He caught a Salmon fish. The next day he called for help. 3 hours later, he saw a helicopter, he put the sign S.O.S (save our solves). Vehar called the helicopter to help him (how nice he is.)
P.S Snowflake is a Terminator.
Vehar ;) 319 word limit
Snow time …
ReplyDeleteShiver shake, drip drop, I slide into the frosty fresh air. My face turns as pink as my mum’s precious flowers. As I fall on the soft white fluffy snow, and as I slowly pick my head off the wet and annoying cold snow. I feel a big chill run through my body and yet … still loving every moment of it.
I feel my hands freeze up, as I pick up the whitest snow ball , I curl it up with my hands and aim at my brother, he’s really not in the mood for a snow ball fight right now. I tuck my hands in my very tiny pockets to warm them up, I try to move them but yet my hands remain as cold as ice cubes. My family and I prepare to make a snow man, but the snow is still flattered on the ground. We gather as much snow as we can into a humongous pile, nearly taking all the snow off the back yard.
Mum gets to cold so she goes in side , barely making it with her numb legs, trying to race in side. There is still my two brothers, Leela Grace and myself. I go off and look for decorations to put on our snow man well they do all the hard work. My brother Richard and I fight with laughter well my other brother Tonga yells at both of us to stop it! We look at each other and smile.
The journey of snow, flying through the fresh frosty air putting chills in warm innocent bodies. Each time a little piece falls from the sky makes it look like heaven has come to earth. Every time a child plays in the snow he or she is as cold as a freezer but is very happy as a child should be and every snow man made it is completed with love, care and joy …
Snow time …
Shiver shake, drip drop, I slide into the frosty fresh air. My face turns as pink as my mum’s precious flowers. As I fall on the soft white fluffy snow, and as I slowly pick my head off the wet and annoying cold snow. I feel a big chill run through my body and yet … still loving every moment of it.
I feel my hands freeze up, as I pick up the whitest snow ball , I curl it up with my hands and aim at my brother, he’s really not in the mood for a snow ball fight right now. I tuck my hands in my very tiny pockets to warm them up, I try to move them but yet my hands remain as cold as ice cubes. My family and I prepare to make a snow man, but the snow is still flattered on the ground. We gather as much snow as we can into a humongous pile, nearly taking all the snow off the back yard.
The journey of snow, flying through the fresh frosty air, putting chills in innocent bodies. Ever time a little piece falls from the sky it looks like heaven has come to earth.
Every time a child plays in the snow he or she is cold but happy as a child should be.
Every time a snow man is made it should be made with care and joy…
frances :words : 567 =)
Snowy day sleeping on my soft ,silky queen bed, my window was open that time a gentle and smooth flake hit my face, I woke up, it was just a flake of snow but it keeps hitting me when I go to sleep. Wherever I go the snow flake keeps following me I just don’t know why. I played with my friends happily at the park then one of my friend said turn around I have a special gift for you but it wasn’t and they all through the snow at my face I was so angry at them.
ReplyDeleteAll of us were playing fun and enjoying games everywhere. I felt sorry for the snow flake because she didn’t have any friends to play with so I went up to the snow flake and said hi, but the snow wasn’t talking, she felt so sad and lonely that’s why she was following me around. But the greatest thing was the snowflake can talk I was so happy that she can talk. She asked me if she wanted to be my friend and I said sure you can be my friend because I felt so sorry for her. She had a smile on her face when I said I will be your friend.
The snow flake showed me to all different kind of places where the snow were the snow were so wonderful, one of the places their was a big as snow ball at the front of a school, all of the kids were still rowing the snow ball, it was gnomons. I just cant believe it they can make that gnomons snow ball but it was only little tiny kids I was so amazed they can make it so big….WOW!!!!!. The snow flake was so nice to me and she so a quite snow flake. But some of the snow flakes came back down and my snow flake had a lot of friends to play with everyday. She was so pleased that I was her friend when she was alone they all went bake where they came from and she was safe. I had a tear on my eye then I raced back home and went under my blanket because it was so cold outside. I ended up at my bed sleeping.
BY Nofoa