Monday, July 11, 2011

Build Yourself Wild!


This week's homework task is to build yourself wild then write a detailed description about the new you. Word limit is 150 so try and be concise! Remember to punctuate your work and capital "I" please. We have a new guest critic this week ...

21 comments:

  1. Aura

    Aura’s specially designed features help her to travel the vast world with ease. Her vulture-like wings are able to glide through the most extreme climates and remain unscathed. Her Siberian tiger paws have claws which are distinct and razor sharp; it twists in angles and gleams in the sun, you can only imagine how she mercilessly tears her prey apart. The sound of a diabolical cackle can quite often be heard after she devours helpless victims in the moonlight with her vicious teeth. Her teeth are like shards, most of them chipped or crooked; nonetheless they still deliver a devastating bite which can leave you in excruciating pain. Aura’s cockroach antennae pick up vibrations in the air and can transmit messages to certain animals. They help her brain operate as she suffered from brain damage in an accident a few years ago. The countless tentacles below her t-shirt can be rather intimidating as they can easily inject deadly toxins for a swift and sudden death. An atrocious and despicable animal.

    Jamin 171 words sorry >:O

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  2. Keziah is a animal called the Pea-pol-rusa-octo-ingo-fly-stingray. This amazing creature has long brown hair. Her ears are white, big and fluffy. Keziah's beautiful eyes are a deep brown colour. On top of Keziah's head there is a sea blue set of peacock feathers. Keziah's nose sticks out of her fece a lot, the nose is grey with horns two small ones on top of the nose and two big ones on each side of the nose, at the tip of the nose there are two massive nostrils. The arms of this marvelous creature are gorgeous blue octopus arms with pink suckers connected along the bottem of the arm. She has marvelous bird legs connected to a bird bottem, this whole area is a light pink but the legs are also connected to some small webbed feet. Keziah has a grey long rats tail and some beautiful butterfly wings.
    (Keziah)

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  3. Ben Dover.

    He is a bisshaillaigertortoscorpian and has a human (English man)with a twist ,an animal twist.
    HE has bison horns that reflect in light but camouflage in the deep dark cave that he tolerates
    but with caution.Ben loves his home but he hates visitors because he thinks it is too messy and only I know him enough too realize what he is going through.Ben big turtle shell covers his back from hunters and his tiger legs means he can charge up to the hunters and kill them with his tail that is venomated (my own word for has venom in it) with his killer snake poison and then he can crush the hunters with the gorilla arms then carry them to his cave to eat . He eats his food with his sand shark teeth.
    his fire sparkles all around so people can come in and see were they go but aaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrggggghhhh.Their dead. this is all the personality of Ben eat kill eat.

    you should visit him....

    DUN DUN DUUUUN

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  4. Zing
    One day a girl called Anne gradually walked through the murky wild forest, to meet her friend Zing that swoops up between the darksome trees. Then suddenly Anne heard an astonishing noise coming from one meter away. It was Zing, she has expanded brown muddy colored hair, with long grey antennae to sense things and for danger, and she has wings that are strong to fly above the blue settled sky. Zing is a friendly person she is half human and half animal. Every day before night fall Zing would go with Anne flying over mountains that has piles and piles of white penetrating snow. When it’s time to land Zing would pull out her orange, white and black tail hooking around a branch to land.
    by helena

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  5. Micah

    Micah is a sea creature called Lun-pol-sha-octo-elly-butterfly.Micah lives in the deep deep blue ocean.Micah has a white feather on her head and she also has a hairy white ears,she has an octopus hand and a jelly fish legs and also has a butterfly wings.Micah has an ugly mouth with a sharp teeth inside,she also has a brown eyes and she has a black hair.Micah has a lovely purple t-shirt that she is wearing.Micah likes to eat big fishes,she need to go to the very deep river and there she can find some big fish,and he can catch the big fish by using her sharp teeth she can just jump on the fish back and bite the fish.Under the ocean she lives in a cave.Micah likes to play with some jelly fishes and making friends with them.In Micah's cave jelly fish sometimes visit in there,and sometimes Micah's friends the jelly fishes help her find some big fish.And Micah is a also a great friend....you can be friends with her...she won't eat any human only big fishes....

    By:Micah C.

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  6. Annalia

    1000 BC a girl was born, her name
    Annalia. As you look down her normal looking body something happens, all of a sudden long grey antennas fold out from the back of her body with a point at the end. Her hair is so straight it has never ever had the slightest kink or curl at the end tip of her hair. The black darkness of her hair is so dark at night you can’t even see it at all. When you look at her eyes, your eyes grow huge, from the black out line with the brown layer then the big stone black pupils in the very middle not even slightly out of place. Smile, the smile on a person should indicate if they are happy or sad or even angry, her smile is like the thinnest bracket looking line on an angle with a curve. The smile makes her look like the cutest little girl you have ever seen. Bat wings, they are perfectly
    straight when she spreads them out like a blank piece of paper laid down on a table. Beautiful color, with a thick grey on the outside then the middle of her wings color is a mix of light pink and purple. The tail is long, grey and has a point at the
    end. She dresses like a normal person which she is not.

    Brianna
    Sorry I went over the 150 word limit.

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  7. Spii is a secretive animal (called a Bushnika)
    And has the huge bush baby eyes so she can see in the shadowy forest she calls her home, she shuffles and walks on 6 brown spider like legs her torso is human though.
    This Bushnika also carries the advantage of spikey antennae on her fairly large human head to collect sunlight to supercharge her body. To collect sunlight She opens her eyes to the maximum and then her eyes glow in a greeny-blue (not aqua) and her antennae shake and she speaks in a cackle like sound, her glowing eyes can also attract small animals she can observe, then do a pounce attack, then when all seems normal she goes into a feeding frenzy, and her normal human teeth transform into yellow teeth of impossible sharpness, so sharp if she closes her mouth the tissue and skin will rip. To keep her mouth open she makes a noise like a saw and she can easily paralyse her pray with her pointy claws, which emerge in the same way as a cat, growing! When the frenzy is gone the Bushnika is back to herself, Spii! And she has a small brain so her memory vanishes after a while so she is left in utter confusion after a frenzy
    I had 177 words , I apologise for going over the limit also in case there are any punctuation errors

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  8. One day the sun was shining so bright,it was a go glorious day.On to my wildself, the name of my wildself is Peace!!!.Peace has pink t-shrit I have picked the pink t-shrit because I want my person to look beautiful and fancy. On my back ground there is clouds and a magnificent blue sky. At the back of Peace it had colourful and brilliant colours. As you may know their is a peacock feathers and it's wonderful colours, it's soft and silky. The colour of Peace's hair is light brown, it's flexible and there are horns, it's sharp it will hurt you if you do something wrong to her, the colours of her horns is dark blue. if you look at her shoes it's purple and that is her best colour ever. on her tongue there is a snake tongue it's red and it will sding you like a bee.

    159 words SORRY
    By nofoa

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  9. this Ibexbathornarkigeratmonitor(ibex-bat-horn-ark-iger-at-monitor) is the ultimate predator. The Ibex horns grow up to three feet long.Unlike antlers you can keep your horns for life.The spear-nosed bat ears help me hear a victim at night for a deadly kill.You don't need to say a word when you have a rinoceros hornbill beak you can talk through your nose.With the nurse shark fins you can swim the ferocious depths of the sea.Run fast you would with the siberian tiger legs and you will never be cold.Your rodriques bat wings allow you to roam the sky with wings that look like really scary long fingers.Now with this Green tree monitor tail you will adapt to any forest grasping branches and sturdy in the swaying trees.
    i think just over 150 words
    bt michael

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  10. V junior

    This fascinating animal is called The Hissossaorbillaflyrattlesnake (Hiss-ossa-orb-illa-fly-rattlesnake). Something happen to his tank body at the first place. I think he travelled to too many countries that's how his suspicous body is transformed. His Hissing Cockroach Antenna looks like TV antenna. V Junior's eyebrows are lightning eyebrows, if anyone touches it, they will die. His hair is a black mohawk, if anyone touuches it, their hand will be bleeding by the spike bit. His Metallic ears are called Fossa ears. His plain black eye looks scary (well not really). He drank heaps of Red Bull cans, that's why you can see his beautiful wings. He's got gigantic arms, just in case somebody bullies him, he can go have a scrap with them. His T shirt has a lightning on it to make him have energy to work hard. His slithery snake tail is quite energetic, it's like a car engine, his tail is 650 horse power. You never want to touch this animal, it's dangerous.
    By: Vehar
    169 words SORRY :(

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  11. My name is Nzingha I have mammoth grass green fly eyes for looking in every direction for food and for keeping an eye out for my arch enemy the flying elephant bat.I have a turtle shell so if I fall it wont hurt that much and for having a fine cosy sleep in.The turtle shell is my well structured house.Now my scaly slimy snake lower body for strangling my opponents and slivering through sand and sticky mud.My octopus arms for swimming at unbelievable speed and for grabbing food in small and tight places and spaces. Gazelle horns for battling my opponents like there are swords and when the food is too high for me I jump up and stab through it and pull and eat.In the winter my ears don't get cold thanks to my fluffy polar bear ears and also when I change destination and the season changes into winter I don't stop and camp or sleep I keep on moving thanks to my polar bear ears.

    by Zac

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  12. Mailing who is jast looks like ordinary girl.. but she wasn't jast ordinary girl..
    she was.. she was talking with ghost.. everyone doesn't know that.. but one day (when she was year 6) one kids sow her.. at the cemetery..!!!!!!
    And she was talking with someone... but no one was there.. kids was looking everywhere but kid can't find it..
    after that day everyone was not playing with her.. no noe..
    she was very lonely but she still have ghost friend.. and she was not angry with them but no one know why she was smile with them..
    1 year later.. all most kids who was tising her..
    was died..
    everyone was died..
    -ann-

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  13. FRANKLIN
    As you can see Franklin has some very big Monarch butterfly compound eye's with very large asian elephant ears. Also as Franklin's hair it is black with conbraids. As Franklin's backside ha has a Radiated tortoise shell and also has very long Gibbon arms. I have picked a green tree monitor tail with red tomato frog legs. As you can see in the backround of this picture it looks like a storm is about to come with very bad ligthing...

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  14. Mc hammer is the same age as the earth because when he was born at the same time the big bang happen.He was in the magnificent explosion and he was created.When the dinosaurs got killed everyone thought that a giant asteroid crashed and killed them but infact it was Mc Hammer with his magnificent and extraordinary super powers that let him do what ever he wants.He majestically flow into the blue ocean air with his californian conder wings that have a large wingspan of almost ten feet and are the biggest wings in North America today.Then he put up his orange sunset god like siberian tiger paws up and claped his paws then this frosty ball of dark dirty rock crashed into the earth.Know Mc Hammer stays hidden in the deep depths of the earth,sometimes staying in different locations so no one will suspect anything.He has recently gone to Africa and it was anbeliveably hot and his fennec fox ears didn't only help him hunt but also help him lose extra body heat in this amazing country.Most animals run away from him but some strong animals came every once and awhile wanting to eat Mc Hammer,but when they came near Mc Hammmer he doesn't care he lets them attack his red tomato frog legs but they don't know that he can release toxic like glue and I know that I wouldn't try to eat that.
    by Liban

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  15. Latasha.

    Hello my name is Latsha and I am a Lio-ossa-orb-cra-ay-horse.I have maroon black eyes four for watching my pray and four for watching out for animals wanting to eat me.My hair is very bushy its like Im half lion, its a nice gold or yellow.I have two fossa ears I can hear from twenty one miles away.My arm are a pail yellow they are gibbon arm they are nearly the size of my body I might be a perfect person. Hairy legs i have all eight of them are very hairy they are hairy crab legs.I have a cownose set of wings and they are very white. I also have mongolian wild horses tail my tail is black long and smooth very smooth i brush it everyday.
    By Kris

    The amount of words I have is:158

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  16. America, Hollywood,once named the famous town now known as a death trap.Its left deserted not a soul lives there,but Sohillah the wild blood thirsty beast.The beast that fought against mankind.So horrible you shall die from looking at her thick brown face,blinded by a layer of dark hair that dangles to her shoulders.how or where this beast came from is unknown,but she shall not be defeated,as she has the power of almost every deadly creature. Sohillah will haunt you and your dreams.You cant hid or run away from her,she has the ears of a rabbit and can hear you from miles away, her mighty lion legs can run at 200 KM's p/h, her giant brown eyes will stare at you proving her innocence while it scans through your brain, looking at every file. Sohillah is more than you expect, she holds the worlds most powerful venom in her slithering Anaconda tongue, which is hungry for blood. Her reindeer horns will crush and tangle every bone in your body. She may be a freak but she does have some cute aspects, such as the long striped tiger tail, the cute flapping shark fins which help her swim every ocean and sea searching for food. also her bird wings that help her fly and kill birds to eat. Sohillah wears a black top with 01 written on it and a dark black short skirt for disguise. She is Sohillah, the rein-rab-conda-ark-li-ird-tiger.

    Sohillah

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  17. JO is 10 years old and he is part of a family of 25.He is a boy that loves to play sports such as soccer rugby and also cricket.JO is as hairy as a gorilla.He has the biggest eyes in the whole the planet.He lives on Venus with 1000000 people and with 5000 aliens.JO loves to watch tv especially the simpsons.JO'S family always complains about his smelly toe jams.He has ENORMOUS red frog feet.JO has a very scalee crocodile tail that has killed millions of people.When JO was 2 years old he had already killed 1.5 million people and went to every single one of there funerals.JO has mussels twice the size of Levis.JO is part bat so he has bat wings,he also is part rabbit so he was born with rabbit ears.JO has a lot of hair on his head, it is as big as a lions.When JO was young his face was deformed be cause his brothers would slap him for never washing his enormous red frog feet. by JOPE

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  18. There once was a boy called Nick he was an orderner boy. One day a witch came to his house she said hello little boy. Do you want some candy he said " yes I would love some candy". So the boy ate the candy and got turned in to some thing weird . Half of his body became a seals light blue and brown tail. Nicks brown eyes make his eyes look so much bigger. He's arms are black and white and also striped like a Zebra. Nick has brown ears in the dark but, when his sea lion ears go into the sun they become white. He has got brown and gold horns that help him find his favourite food.


    bye Alex

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  19. My crature is named peter. He has the tentacles of a potugeise ma of war. Its so poisonous that it can kill you with out even touching you. It has flamingoe like wings with black dark brown and pink feathers. It has the eyes of a jumping spider as black as night. Its hair is in pig tails adis as dark as your darkest nightmare. It is wearing a black t-shirt with rainbows and crowns on it, with a princess in bold capatil letters. its skin on its face is a tanny brown colour. The most useful feature is its horns from a spring bok. It can only just fly beause its 123,456,789 pounds.

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  21. Well done to Olivia and Michael for being the winning writers this week! Mr Young had a tough time judging the writing samples this week ... keep the blog active over the holidays team - let everyone in our class know what you have been up to! Stay safe and have a great holiday! Mrs Y :-)

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