Brian sat quietly, taken by a peace he had not known for a long time, and let the canoe drift forward along the lily pads. To his right was the shoreline of a small lake he had flown into an hour earlier...
As Brian was sitting by the lake letting all his emotions out... He couldn’t concentrate because sitting behind him was Bear Grylls. Yes when Brian got home he got to pick ANYONE to go back to the Canadian woods so he can teach that person what he learnt. So he picked Bear Grylls, Brian thought if he picked someone that had already been and done something like what Brian went through Brian could learn some things off him.
When they were sitting by the lake Brian was enjoying his time being back because in the city it was noisy with all the cars zooming past and all the pollution, so Brian sat there admiring the beautiful Canadian woods. But bear didn’t find it that fun. He’s more of an adventurous person so after dinner bear went to sleep but... at midnight bear woke up and woke Brian up and they went hunting. They went hunting for bears birds any kind of meat possible, they found a bird they have never seen it was like a mix between a flamingo and a emu. They killed it and saved it for the next night.
The next day Brian needed a shower so he asked bear how he has showers in the woods, bear replied saying i jump in any lake that looks clean and takes a dip. Later in that week all the food was gone they were starving and bear got really sick because he ate a bad bird so he stays in the tent all day and Brian hunts. The plane was suppose to come on the 14th of October but that day came and no plane three weeks past and bear was getting sicker and sicker....the rest will be in the book Hatchet The Return By Kris Giles Amount of words: 307 XD
Brian sat quietly, taken by a peace he had not known for a long time, and let the canoe drift forward along the lily pads. To his right was the shoreline of a small lake he had flown into an hour earlier. His brother, Tyler gazed upon the vast open space behind them and seemed to be caught in a trance.
The canoe finally came to a stop as it gently bumped against the shore of their desired destination. He was back. But this time with a companion, his long-lost brother. He handed him the limited provisions given to them to survive ten days in the wild in order to train up other possible survival instructors. Coincidentally, his brother was a volunteer and he was sent here along with Brian to engage in the rare experience. “That is where my previous shelter was…” Brian started awkwardly, pointing to the obvious outline, “I uh, think that will be a good place to set up our shelter too.” Tyler nodded an expressionless reply and straightened his jacket. They trudged up along the hill towards it. “So, what do you think we should do first?” asked Brian trying to sound professional, after all he was the one who was showing him the ropes. “Um, set up the shelter?” mumbled Tyler as they reached the rocky formation. “Good, ok so show me how to do it,” grinned Brian. So Tyler demonstrated his method of setting up a shelter with the available materials, and even though a few times Brian had to interrupt to explain something, Tyler did surprisingly well.
The shelter had now been completed, fit with two sleeping bags, an overhanging tarpaulin and neatly stacked storage units for extra items. Just as Brian had dusted his hands, admiring their work, a piercing stab came from his stomach and he winced in pain. “Are you alright?” blurted Tyler as he reached out to balance Brian. “Yeah, yeah I-I’m fine.” He grunted, but just then he felt another round of fresh, sharp pain as if an arrow had thumped into his stomach and he screamed. Beads of sweat formed on his forehead and dripped down the tip of his nose. Tyler did not know what to do…
Aiming, Hunting and shooting. As Brian sailed back into the same lake he left the pilot’s body, and lived through horrible conditions such as the terrorizing tornado and the shivering coldness. With a nature expert who also used to deal with living in devastating conditions, and put people through them, to show them what it was like in other people’s lives. Their faces were as stunned as a mother who found out her child had been seriously injured. The camp site Brian once lived in was deserted, all of his things, his bow, his spear and the wing of the plane, all gone.
Brian thought to himself was there a bear or a dear, or was it another survivor who had been hiking and had been left behind. But it was not any of these, the expert mumbled “dam collectors”. He said they were special people who always came to deserted places where people had been and suffered horrible conditions and have had a heart wrenching story to tell. They would take every item that was left and show to people and say the once did what you or someone else did, the they would get into the newspaper, and then be rich.
Brian starred into empty space and the gazed at the beautiful sky as blue and no polluted as it was when he was here last. Then he remembered the devastating times, when he had to rebuild and starve. Brian wanted to leave, leave and forget what had happened. But no the expert forced him to stay and say what had been all ready told, as Brian told him he looked at the ground and said nothing and sighed. In the end they were there for five days. Five days where Brian had just forgot about all the hurtful things that had happened. But then Brian soon realized that this could help people who need to learn how to survive, so he continued to talk about what had happened and how it did.
Brian sat quietly taken by a peace he had not known in a long time , and let the canoe drift forward along the lilypads . To his right was the shoreline of a small lake he had flown into and hour earlier with Bear Grylls. As the canoe drifted closer to the shore line. They once again looked around enjoying the natural beauty of the towering mountains , casting shadows , keeping the sweat away.
Remembering the peace was easy for brian though because he had kept a small piece of snagged grey rock that he had taken from is shelter so he could keep a memory of the place , a accidental adventure. But this time he took a small sky blue waterproof camera so he could snap a couple videos of important parts of his experiences so when he was back he could be the star special episode of ‘Man V.S Wild’
Brian sat quietly, taken by a peace he had not know for a long time and let the canoe drift forward along the lily pads. to his right was tyhe shoreline of a small lake he had flowen in to an hour ealier the lake was blue as a sky, Brian sat quickly with his friends John, Brian was thinking about how long he was in the forest he show john how to do a sheltter because john have never been out in the forest. Brian told John what he has been through for along tame he was in the scary and freaky forest. Brian and John had a silent moment, it was peacful and silent in the forest, the lake was so beautiful like cute babies. Brian told John how the plane crushed inisde the lake, John can see some of the peaces of the plane drifting acoss the blue lake. Brian shoe John what he cooked his food with and getting claen fresh water. And even Brian showed John he sleeps on and waht he sleeps on John just cant believe he can survive for that long ha was amazed about Brian.
Brian is now with Bear Grylls, they're in the forest hunting for food. They the sign S.O.S, just in case somebody sees the sign and will save them straight away. Meanwhile, his old friend Michael Jackson came to rescue him on a helicopter. Michael was bored and decided that he want to fly a helicopter. When he was cruising around, he saw the sign S.O.S and looked for Brian & Bear. Back in the forest...Brian is thinking about how to get on a helicopter, there is no ladder...5 minutes later, Bear had an idea, he said "Brian, Let's go find a big tree, and jump of it!" "Are you out of your mind?" Yelled Brian. "You can think of your own plan, I'm doing my way!" Screamed Bear. Bear has been looking for a big tree for half an hour, Michael was following him. 1 hour later he found a tree, so he jumped of it and made it on the helicopter, now Brian is gonna do the same thing as Bear. Oh no!, he broke his back because Bear & Michael Couldn't hold onto Brian's hand tightly, so he is still in the forest, and now Bear is going down and told Michael to get the ambulance. Wee Oo Wee Oo! The Ambulance is here. 4 and a half hours later, he is at the Upper Riccarton hospital.
1 week later....He is now okay but his back is still broken, he is in a wheelchair, the doctor said he can go home. Poor Brian, he got no home to stay because his house got burnt down by the Hooligan peoples. Luckily Michael asked Brian if he wants to live at his mansion, Brian said yes, and thanked him, Michael called his security to come and get the 640 horsepower van, 30 minutes later the van have arrived, Michael drove very fast, until he got home, Brian has car sick, and puked all everywhere. Michael walked up to his mansion and opened the door. "God damn, this mansion is pimped!" Screamed Brian. -Cough cough- Michael took Brian to get some rest in the room.
The next day something happened to Brian, he fell off the bed and went crazy, Michael called 111. He thinks Brian got convulsion because he's coughing hardcore. "Hurry up guys, put him in the precious van!" Growled Mike. 5 minutes later they're at the hospital, he is in the emergency room, afterwards the doctor told Mike he is definetly fine, and the doctor put sleeping pills for him to get some rest. The next day, some Hooligan guy came in the room and stabbed Brian while he's awake. Mike came in the room and saw blood, he press the button to call the doctor. 30 minute later, the doctor came out of the room and said he's dead. Mike started weeping, and told everyone. He invited everyone to come to the funeral of Brian. The funeral has started has started and suddenly his dad notice that he died, R.I.P Brian.
……….. He was almost back. Brian laid back with a smile on his face, he forgot entirely that Bear Grylls the great explorer was with him. Bear was watching the view go past until they hit a big loud bump. They were there. Brian and Bear jumped onto shore. Mr Grylls got out his video camera and was ready to learn. They walked off until they found the camp site. Brian was astonished to find out that the camp site was still there, untouched and fine. Brian was so happy, suddenly his happiness was ruined when Bear asked Brian “oh no what will we do now this place is ruined” Brian screamed at him in frustration “you idiot it has not changed a bit lets see you make better !!!!!” . Bear walked away To go exploring. It has been 3 hours. Brian went looking for bear it has been too long. When I was around 2 hours away from camp a big bad grizzly bear jumped out of the bushes. Brian has never been to this part of the bushes. ………… By Keziah
Brian is back to his home,, but still he is still thinking about the forest and wanted to go bake to forest but he don't have any of the plan so he make someone who will go with him but that he think he need really important thing to have,,, anyway he make friend to go with him and than he finaly take his stuff to take it. The day to go back to forest Brian was really happy (ann)
because he find his real home to live first time he out of the forest he think all thing is clear but when he back to the home he fell something is going back,, but now he's life he are good becuase he is back to the forest,,. his new friend at the forest is everyday say it is hard to stay.. ann
but brian was always say thank you for comming here with me and I'm sorry.. that day he and his friend always smile each other. he and his friend eat the food made from the roten egg or the berrys.. he and his friend was go to catching the animals to eat or taking cloth,, and 7 days laft from go back to the city he was really sad about the he is going back but he get all thing picture on it and having fun day.. d- day he finaly come back to the city and right abput the forest long time at the diary. last from his friend is really wonderful time his ever have. ann
Brian sat quietly taken by a peace he had not known in a long time , and let the canoe drift forward along the lily pads . To his right was the shoreline of a small lake he had flown into and hour earlier he kept having day dreams about what happened and what could of happened. “Brian, Brian a man calls his name with a deep voice. It was the one and only the famous Bear Grills.
Brian had set out for another extreme adventure, but not on his own but with the famous Bear Grills. Bear Grills and Brian had planned to stay in the Canadian forest. They both planned to stay there for ten days.
In the Canadian forest Brian kept getting small short flashes in his head about the pass. Bear grills and Brian had all that they needed to survive for ten days. Bear grills started to look around. His head was blank.”Brian how did you survive out here???? “ I just, just........read more on this on the book Hatchet the return.
The Return Brian came back from the city where all the drama and noise from people and the media wanting to know more information. So Brian sails along the quiet lake with his partner Bear Grylls. They talk about how he got his survival skills from. The boat slowly swims down to land for Brian and Bear Grylls to stand on foot. Brian takes Bear Grylls on a tour where he made his shelter. As the two men leap through the deep forest there were birds, bugs and water dropping, silently flowing to the sound of a beat been played smoothly between pauses. As they reach the destination, Brian has the fire made by wood, grass and his hatch. His shelter is made like a cave. Brian walks with Bear Grylls where he goes hunting for food like birds, eggs, fish and berries, his awesome weapons he made was very talented of making. As they stay for a night of a camp survival, on the way Bear Grylls gives some good tips for the future. By Helena 176 Words
Last time we were with Brian he just took a job as the camera for the man himself Bear Grllys.Bear said one thing to Brian "before you can be my camera I want to se how you survived in the canadian forests".Brian said yes with out thinking twice about it, but one thing Brian doesn't know is that when they arrive is that Bear's team are going to pretend that the plane doesn't work to see if Brian will crumble under the stress of being lost again.
5 days later Brian,Bear and two team members arrive on plane on top of the river,while Brian ws getting off the plane one of the crew drains the fuel into a bottle.Brian felt that something changed something was different he like something was watching him,when Brian was told that they had no way of getting out he didnt react as bad as the team and Bear thought,Brian was kind of happy to be back to this wonderful place.
1week later Brian has explain and showen what he had to do to survive back when he was by himself.When Brian,Bear and the crew where sitting beside the roring fire Brian noticed a change in the wind then he looked around and saw the bear but it had changed it had this killer look in its eyes,Brian told Bear and his team to go some where safe while Brian keeped the bear busy,Bear said to meet us up at the plane.Brian walked back as the bear came closer then he was backed up by a tree he felt something and looked down it was his bow and two arrows he picked it up and fired one it missed then the bear got up on its back feet then Brian hit one of the paws in the air.Then Brian run to the plane he saw that the plane was taking off and run after it with the bear behide him he was just a meter away from the plane and jumped Bear grabed his hand and said your our new camera man.
As the filming began Brian and bear took a trip to Brian’s shelter to determine who would sleep where and what they would catch for food and bear began to explain the situation he has chosen to go in to for the starting of the documentary also including introducing Brian. While Brian was happy that his parents could finally understand what he had gone through he was sad because he was stuck in the void of loneliness but he wasn’t lonely that was the bright side for Brian.
Brian had gained skills from his experience and now being with his idol he could learn more about chances of survival but bear was irritating too because he told stories about the fact he had never actually peed in a toilet and trying to be all 'motivational speaker' and blabbered on and on like (this is real quotes for information on Bear) "The difference between ordinary and extra-ordinary is so often just simply that little word - extra. And for me, I had always grown up with the belief that if someone succeeds it is because they are brilliant or talented or just better than me… and the more of these words I heard the smaller I always felt! But the truth is often very different… and for me to learn that ordinary me can achieve something extra-ordinary by giving that little bit extra, when everyone else gives up, meant the world to me and I really clung to it…" (which is a real quote from Bear Grylls) (and no that does not count in my word count!) and that (on how he got his nickname) ‘Bear is an old nickname I've had since I was about half an hour old. And it's kind of stuck.’ And that apparently hes pathetic because on which is worse, being really hot or really cold) Being really cold. I have been unfortunate enough to spend much of my life being really cold, and I lie at home now in a hot bath and complain to my wife that there’s not enough hot water. She says, ‘If people could know how pathetic you really are.’
Brian sat quietly, taken by surprise by a peace he had not known for a long time and let the canoe drift forward along the lily pads. To his right was the shore line of a small lake he had flown into an hour earlier. When Brian hits the shoreline with his feet he tells bear grylls to come over here. They get some food for a day and try to get something going. Brian tries to remember what he did to start a fire they sit down and start saying ideas like using the hatchet then it starts coming back to Brian he finds what he used to begin the fire but then he made a mistake like the first time he tried to start a fire. After that he learnt of his mistake and then he made a fire bear grylls clapped and said well done mate
Wow, Bear come look at this my bow and arrow is still here and so is my spear. And this is the exact pond where I used to do my fishing. When ever I would shoot my bow into the pond to catch my fish the bow would always go on a angle. When I caught my first fish I roasted it on the fire until the skin was crispy and flaky, and the meat was moist and tender. When I took my first bite it was like I like I landed in heaven. Hey Bear come look the plane that I had my crash in is still here. In my last days here I got all the survival packs out and ate them all, man was it delicious.
Well Brian if you find rotten logs like this you will be sure to find big fat juicy caterpillar look a like bugs and heaps of other ones as well. I love these big fat juicy ones they are the best but sometimes they have flam inside of them. There was one time when I was in Ireland and I was trying to wrestle down a massive as wild pig. Then I finally got the big meaty wild pig from behind and stabbed it on the wild pigs back. Well Brian over these last 10 days I have taught you some things and you have taught me some things but now we got to go back to where we came from. I will see you in 5 years time and maybe we can teach each other some more survival skills.
When Brian got home to his wife and kids he started to get mail from bear every month. Brian was collecting new skills every time Bear gave him mail.
(Hatchet the return) After a years ago as Brian has been rescued.As Brian sat down with Bear Grylls beside he was thinking that he wants to go back to the Canadian forest he also wanted that someone could come with him.Brian's mum allows him to go back to the Canadian forest.Brian and Bear Grylls was talking about the past time about what happen to Brian's plane crash as they were in the plane.
Finally Brian and Bear Grylls reached the land they were walking for a while Brian saw the shelter that he made the last time and they stayed there.2 hours later Brian and Bear was hunting for food they found a lake and there were a lots of fish in there they took a 3 fish for their dinner they make a fire and cook the fish in there.Mean while Brian and Bear went inside the shelter and sleep.
The next day Bear wondered if there is someone that we'll rescue them and he told it to Brian about that.Bear told Brian about his adventure and he teach it to Brian.When Bear was talking to him Brian also got a new skills from Bear after that they where exploring all the places about 1 week.Brian and Bear were now finding how to be rescued in there.Bear you got any idea?Brian said.Just wait.Bear said.They climb up in the mountain and they wait until it was dark a while ago it was a little bit of dark and they saw a plane they put a fire for signal they pilot saw them and it goes down Brian and Bear went inside to the plane they were very happy that someone rescue them.The plane was flying the,Brian felt something that he felt the last time about the plane crash suddenly he smell something(ewhh smelly)wait thats what I smell the last time I was on the plane and the pilot got a heart atacck.The plane suddenly goes down Brian was frightened he says that the plane crash again.Bear walking to the pilot seat(the pilot is dead)1 minute.......BOOOOSSSHHH!!! To be continued....
As Brian smells the fresh warm air in and out, Brian thinks about what would have happened if he hadn’t been saved. Brian is with Bear Grills, Brian slowly points out the window of the helicopter to point to where the island is for the pilot to land. Once they landed Brian and Bear hope out and look around, Brian had remembered all the trees and bushes that he had to live beside. Bear had wondered why he had never seen this island before out of all the places he had been to he had never been to this one. They both start to unpack well watching the helicopter fly away; they both unpack and realize that they are going to be here for six days. Brian makes sure he has everything before he goes and shows Bear around and explore around.
The next two days they both are living in the island going through all the things Brian went through. Bear is enjoying the adventure that he is having with Brian and is thinking about bringing Brian on to his shows some time. Brian and Bear both sit down and talk, they are thinking about staying an extra day to explore more. Three days later they had both decided to stay a extra day or two. Brian and Bear both have had a lot of good times but the last day they both also decided to relax and het ready to pack and leave. Last day they arrived home and said there good byes and Bear asked Brian to come on to his show. Brian replied with a big YES!!
Brian was in the Canadian forest with Bear Grylls and another man called Dylan. Bear Grylls was there to help if anything was wrong. But Dylan was taking notes. Bear Grylls took a knife and his rug sack as brian took his hatchet. On day on Brian, Dylan and Bear went out looking out for wood for there fire they take all the wood back to the camp to builed a shelter and to keep the fire on the whole night. Day two it was minus seven and it was snowing so Brian went up to the mountain to put his signal fire but first Brian needs to move all the snow and make a hut for the wood and the signal fire so there is lots of smoke. Brian had finished with the signal fire and headed back to the camp and Bear said lets go down the dam and try find some water or food but they didn't find food or water just Brians water bottle.
The warm air of the Canadian forest was all brian felt at that momment when he reached the location of were the plane crashed that Dreadful day. Brian wondered towords it and asked his friend Cody "were the plane has gone have they taken it" Brian questioned "i think theyt took it to some labratory to do some forensics on it to seen how long you were out here for?" replied Cody. Brian stared at Cody then at the crash site brian thought to him self "what were to happoned if they never found me but then the boat they were on started to shake like it was shoved by something. Quickly brian cheacked for damage and luckily for them no holes, Then cody saw a shadow underneth them just as he could see it SMACK!!!!! the boat was violently throwed back and fro Then Cody fell in the freezing water and he nearly reached the boat when he was pulled under because of the beast and thats all Brian saw of Cody again.
Brian sat quitly,taken by a peace he had not known for a long time,and let the canoe drift forward along the lily pads.to his right was the shore line of a small lake he had flown into an hour ago.He sat there at the edge of the canoe watching the birds chirpping and flying from branch to branch.This was it ,it was the kind of place Brian wanted to call home,leaving the concret jungles of the normal world he had returned to the wild jungles where he felt cumfortable.This time he wasnt alone,John Williams Green,the man who had saved his life would acompany him on his journey.John would gaze very carefully at Brian,looking at every detail and movements and then he would jot down all of this in his notebook.Brian had no idea why he did this,he was only a pilot wasnt he,he would have asked several times getting no answer.Beming down the heat of the sun would sweep over Brian making him want to rest his eyes for a while,so he did,thinking John would be fine alone.Several hours later Brian woke up to a crash.Looking around in panice,he didnt see John ,the boat was fine but where was John.He looked and called out,but nothing movedand no sound was heard.A cold shiver went down hie spine,this was apaart of the lake he hadent yet visited.blocking the heat,the tall trees stode around the lake,so close to the edge it would seem like it would fall on you.Knowing that what ever happens he must go and save his friend.Full of courage and hope he stode out onto the shore line,making sure to tie the canoe to a tree.Taking a couple of steps into the forest,he desided to have one more look in the lake.To bad,a reptile so big he had forgotten its name.Slithering out of the water like a snake,to open up its wide mouth,letting all his sharp edged covered in blood,teeth be seen.could this be the end... Sohillah
Soon we jumped off the boat then started to fish. Spear fishing didn't work so we made a nother bow and arrow. This is when we got back to shore. As we are fishing and searching for some wood we find the hutjust sitting there how I left it and not crumbleing nothing. So we just stay the night. The moose returns and starts to ram the place so we kill it, with a spear and our bows. My companion is LT Mayerhoff,he is incompitent and impationt. I have to train him to start acting like me but him being U.S millitry it will be hard to train him as a civillian. We stumble across a wild boar and I have to save him from himself. But he kills it. We go back to the desperote hut and stay the way I did but for a week. He didn't like it but I did and he was like so "aa aa I'm leaving'.
“This is Brian and I am about to anchor back at the coast of the Canadian Rockies. With me I have Jackson Newman. I am here to get back my hatchet I never got from the campers who rescued me.”
Brian has now anchored at the Canadian Rockies and looks out at the area with a pair of binoculars. He got in a row boat and then he saw a couple of wolves. One as white as snow. The other one as black as your darkest nightmare.
It’s good to be back. After two and a half days of traveling. He finally reached the area of which he crashed. The hut was different and the raft different too. But one particular thing caught his eyes the fire was going. Then in a flash of darkness, a young boy swung from a vine and sliced through Jackson’s cheek. His name was Ryan and he had Brian’s hatchet he grabbed it and he kept it. The next couple of days they searched and looked around then they left for the ship.
Brian is in the Canadian Forest with his best mate Bear Grill, they had to go and do some research on the Canadian forest, because the scientists don’t know about this forest, they haven’t done much research on it before.
Bear grills is in the helicopter with Brian and they are sitting on the edge of the helicopter ready to jump. They counted to three but Brian had not done this before. They then jumped off the big helicopter with excitement, wooosh! The parachute came out rapidly… Brian was flying down with emotive thrill.
Suddenly they approached the bottom of the hills and started to get into the forest. And suddenly a big, black staunch bear came storming up behind them with a big ROAR. To find out more read the return.
Beside the lake he thought the times when he was in his home. Brian was rescued by in the land and came home. He tried to go back to normal, but he couldn’t. on the first day, it seemed that everything was good because he could eat what he wanted and any fries and mosquitoes didn’t prevent him from sleeping comfortably. On the second, third….eighth day all the things were more wonderful than in island. However he started missed the island. He went to the school where the teachers scolding and student were talking. Out of the school window, cars and people were passing by. At the moment some birds came to him and they looked free. He realized that he is missing such freedom.
On returning home, he went straight to the bed, thing of memories of his happy times in the island even through life was hard. He wanted be back there. At last he decided to leave for the wild but free island. That was how he could came back to island. He was happy to be back here. In wild island he was happy. emily
Hatchet The Return!!
ReplyDeleteAs Brian was sitting by the lake letting all his emotions out... He couldn’t concentrate because sitting behind him was Bear Grylls. Yes when Brian got home he got to pick ANYONE to go back to the Canadian woods so he can teach that person what he learnt. So he picked Bear Grylls, Brian thought if he picked someone that had already been and done something like what Brian went through Brian could learn some things off him.
When they were sitting by the lake Brian was enjoying his time being back because in the city it was noisy with all the cars zooming past and all the pollution, so Brian sat there admiring the beautiful Canadian woods. But bear didn’t find it that fun. He’s more of an adventurous person so after dinner bear went to sleep but... at midnight bear woke up and woke Brian up and they went hunting. They went hunting for bears birds any kind of meat possible, they found a bird they have never seen it was like a mix between a flamingo and a emu. They killed it and saved it for the next night.
The next day Brian needed a shower so he asked bear how he has showers in the woods, bear replied saying i jump in any lake that looks clean and takes a dip. Later in that week all the food was gone they were starving and bear got really sick because he ate a bad bird so he stays in the tent all day and Brian hunts. The plane was suppose to come on the 14th of October but that day came and no plane three weeks past and bear was getting sicker and sicker....the rest will be in the book Hatchet The Return
By Kris Giles
Amount of words: 307 XD
Prologue
ReplyDeleteBrian sat quietly, taken by a peace he had not known for a long time, and let the canoe drift forward along the lily pads. To his right was the shoreline of a small lake he had flown into an hour earlier. His brother, Tyler gazed upon the vast open space behind them and seemed to be caught in a trance.
The canoe finally came to a stop as it gently bumped against the shore of their desired destination. He was back. But this time with a companion, his long-lost brother. He handed him the limited provisions given to them to survive ten days in the wild in order to train up other possible survival instructors. Coincidentally, his brother was a volunteer and he was sent here along with Brian to engage in the rare experience. “That is where my previous shelter was…” Brian started awkwardly, pointing to the obvious outline, “I uh, think that will be a good place to set up our shelter too.” Tyler nodded an expressionless reply and straightened his jacket. They trudged up along the hill towards it. “So, what do you think we should do first?” asked Brian trying to sound professional, after all he was the one who was showing him the ropes. “Um, set up the shelter?” mumbled Tyler as they reached the rocky formation. “Good, ok so show me how to do it,” grinned Brian. So Tyler demonstrated his method of setting up a shelter with the available materials, and even though a few times Brian had to interrupt to explain something, Tyler did surprisingly well.
The shelter had now been completed, fit with two sleeping bags, an overhanging tarpaulin and neatly stacked storage units for extra items. Just as Brian had dusted his hands, admiring their work, a piercing stab came from his stomach and he winced in pain. “Are you alright?” blurted Tyler as he reached out to balance Brian. “Yeah, yeah I-I’m fine.” He grunted, but just then he felt another round of fresh, sharp pain as if an arrow had thumped into his stomach and he screamed. Beads of sweat formed on his forehead and dripped down the tip of his nose. Tyler did not know what to do…
Jamin 373 words (x
Aiming, Hunting and shooting. As Brian sailed back into the same lake he left the pilot’s body, and lived through horrible conditions such as the terrorizing tornado and the shivering coldness. With a nature expert who also used to deal with living in devastating conditions, and put people through them, to show them what it was like in other people’s lives. Their faces were as stunned as a mother who found out her child had been seriously injured. The camp site Brian once lived in was deserted, all of his things, his bow, his spear and the wing of the plane, all gone.
ReplyDeleteBrian thought to himself was there a bear or a dear, or was it another survivor who had been hiking and had been left behind.
But it was not any of these, the expert mumbled “dam collectors”.
He said they were special people who always came to deserted places where people had been and suffered horrible conditions and have had a heart wrenching story to tell. They would take every item that was left and show to people and say the once did what you or someone else did, the they would get into the newspaper,
and then be rich.
Brian starred into empty space and the gazed at the beautiful sky as blue and no polluted as it was when he was here last. Then he remembered the devastating times, when he had to rebuild and starve. Brian wanted to leave, leave and forget what had happened. But no the expert forced him to stay and say what had been all ready told, as Brian told him he looked at the ground and said nothing and sighed. In the end they were there for five days. Five days where Brian had just forgot about all the hurtful things that had happened. But then Brian soon realized that this could help people who need to learn how to survive, so he continued to talk about what had happened and how it did.
Brianna
336 words XD
Brian sat quietly taken by a peace he had not known in a long time , and let the canoe drift forward along the lilypads . To his right was the shoreline of a small lake he had flown into and hour earlier with Bear Grylls. As the canoe drifted closer to the shore line. They once again looked around enjoying the natural beauty of the towering mountains , casting shadows , keeping the sweat away.
ReplyDeleteRemembering the peace was easy for brian though because he had kept a small piece of snagged grey rock that he had taken from is shelter so he could keep a memory of the place , a accidental adventure. But this time he took a small sky blue waterproof camera so he could snap a couple videos of important parts of his experiences so when he was back he could be the star special episode of ‘Man V.S Wild’
mine was only about 133 words
ReplyDeletei will continue mine tommorrow as the prologue continues
ReplyDeleteBrian sat quietly, taken by a peace he had not know for a long time and let the canoe drift forward along the lily pads. to his right was tyhe shoreline of a small lake he had flowen in to an hour ealier the lake was blue as a sky, Brian sat quickly with his friends John, Brian was thinking about how long he was in the forest he show john how to do a sheltter because john have never been out in the forest. Brian told John what he has been through for along tame he was in the scary and freaky forest. Brian and John had a silent moment, it was peacful and silent in the forest, the lake was so beautiful like cute babies. Brian told John how the plane crushed inisde the lake, John can see some of the peaces of the plane drifting acoss the blue lake. Brian shoe John what he cooked his food with and getting claen fresh water. And even Brian showed John he sleeps on and waht he sleeps on John just cant believe he can survive for that long ha was amazed about Brian.
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Brian is now with Bear Grylls, they're in the forest hunting for food. They the sign S.O.S, just in case somebody sees the sign and will save them straight away. Meanwhile, his old friend Michael Jackson came to rescue him on a helicopter. Michael was bored and decided that he want to fly a helicopter. When he was cruising around, he saw the sign S.O.S and looked for Brian & Bear. Back in the forest...Brian is thinking about how to get on a helicopter, there is no ladder...5 minutes later, Bear had an idea, he said "Brian, Let's go find a big tree, and jump of it!" "Are you out of your mind?" Yelled Brian. "You can think of your own plan, I'm doing my way!" Screamed Bear. Bear has been looking for a big tree for half an hour, Michael was following him. 1 hour later he found a tree, so he jumped of it and made it on the helicopter, now Brian is gonna do the same thing as Bear. Oh no!, he broke his back because Bear & Michael Couldn't hold onto Brian's hand tightly, so he is still in the forest, and now Bear is going down and told Michael to get the ambulance. Wee Oo Wee Oo! The Ambulance is here. 4 and a half hours later, he is at the Upper Riccarton hospital.
ReplyDelete1 week later....He is now okay but his back is still broken, he is in a wheelchair, the doctor said he can go home. Poor Brian, he got no home to stay because his house got burnt down by the Hooligan peoples. Luckily Michael asked Brian if he wants to live at his mansion, Brian said yes, and thanked him, Michael called his security to come and get the 640 horsepower van, 30 minutes later the van have arrived, Michael drove very fast, until he got home, Brian has car sick, and puked all everywhere. Michael walked up to his mansion and opened the door. "God damn, this mansion is pimped!" Screamed Brian. -Cough cough- Michael took Brian to get some rest in the room.
The next day something happened to Brian, he fell off the bed and went crazy, Michael called 111. He thinks Brian got convulsion because he's coughing hardcore. "Hurry up guys, put him in the precious van!" Growled Mike. 5 minutes later they're at the hospital, he is in the emergency room, afterwards the doctor told Mike he is definetly fine, and the doctor put sleeping pills for him to get some rest. The next day, some Hooligan guy came in the room and stabbed Brian while he's awake. Mike came in the room and saw blood, he press the button to call the doctor. 30 minute later, the doctor came out of the room and said he's dead. Mike started weeping, and told everyone. He invited everyone to come to the funeral of Brian. The funeral has started has started and suddenly his dad notice that he died, R.I.P Brian.
Vehar :'(
……….. He was almost back. Brian laid back with a smile on his face, he forgot entirely that Bear Grylls the great explorer was with him. Bear was watching the view go past until they hit a big loud bump. They were there. Brian and Bear jumped onto shore. Mr Grylls got out his video camera and was ready to learn. They walked off until they found the camp site. Brian was astonished to find out that the camp site was still there, untouched and fine. Brian was so happy, suddenly his happiness was ruined when Bear asked Brian “oh no what will we do now this place is ruined” Brian screamed at him in frustration “you idiot it has not changed a bit lets see you make better !!!!!” . Bear walked away To go exploring. It has been 3 hours. Brian went looking for bear it has been too long. When I was around 2 hours away from camp a big bad grizzly bear jumped out of the bushes. Brian has never been to this part of the bushes. …………
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Brian is back to his home,, but still he is still thinking about the forest and wanted to go bake to forest but he don't have any of the plan so he make someone who will go with him but that he think he need really important thing to have,,, anyway he make friend to go with him and than he finaly take his stuff to take it.
ReplyDeleteThe day to go back to forest Brian was really happy (ann)
because he find his real home to live first time he out of the forest he think all thing is clear but when he back to the home he fell something is going back,, but now he's life he are good becuase he is back to the forest,,.
ReplyDeletehis new friend at the forest is everyday say it is hard to stay.. ann
but brian was always say thank you for comming here with me and I'm sorry.. that day he and his friend always smile each other.
ReplyDeletehe and his friend eat the food made from the roten egg or the berrys..
he and his friend was go to catching the animals to eat or taking cloth,, and 7 days laft from go back to the city he was really sad about the he is going back but he get all thing picture on it and having fun day..
d- day he finaly come back to the city and right abput the forest long time at the diary.
last from his friend is really wonderful time his ever have. ann
I like your post Vehar, Keep it up!
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PROLOUGE!!
ReplyDeleteBrian sat quietly taken by a peace he had not known in a long time , and let the canoe drift forward along the lily pads . To his right was the shoreline of a small lake he had flown into and hour earlier he kept having day dreams about what happened and what could of happened. “Brian, Brian a man calls his name with a deep voice. It was the one and only the famous Bear Grills.
Brian had set out for another extreme adventure, but not on his own but with the famous Bear Grills. Bear Grills and Brian had planned to stay in the Canadian forest. They both planned to stay there for ten days.
In the Canadian forest Brian kept getting small short flashes in his head about the pass. Bear grills and Brian had all that they needed to survive for ten days. Bear grills started to look around. His head was blank.”Brian how did you survive out here???? “ I just, just........read more on this on the book Hatchet the return.
NUUSILA!!!
Hello everyone, please remember to proof read and continue to edit your work, I'm picking up a few errors.
ReplyDeleteJamin :D
The Return
ReplyDeleteBrian came back from the city where all the drama and noise from people and the media wanting to know more information. So Brian sails along the quiet lake with his partner Bear Grylls. They talk about how he got his survival skills from. The boat slowly swims down to land for Brian and Bear Grylls to stand on foot. Brian takes Bear Grylls on a tour where he made his shelter. As the two men leap through the deep forest there were birds, bugs and water dropping, silently flowing to the sound of a beat been played smoothly between pauses. As they reach the destination, Brian has the fire made by wood, grass and his hatch. His shelter is made like a cave. Brian walks with Bear Grylls where he goes hunting for food like birds, eggs, fish and berries, his awesome weapons he made was very talented of making. As they stay for a night of a camp survival, on the way Bear Grylls gives some good tips for the future.
By Helena
176 Words
Last time we were with Brian he just took a job as the camera for the man himself Bear Grllys.Bear said one thing to Brian "before you can be my camera I want to se how you survived in the canadian forests".Brian said yes with out thinking twice about it, but one thing Brian doesn't know is that when they arrive is that Bear's team are going to pretend that the plane doesn't work to see if Brian will crumble under the stress of being lost again.
ReplyDelete5 days later Brian,Bear and two team members arrive on plane on top of the river,while Brian ws getting off the plane one of the crew drains the fuel into a bottle.Brian felt that something changed something was different he like something was watching him,when Brian was told that they had no way of getting out he didnt react as bad as the team and Bear thought,Brian was kind of happy to be back to this wonderful place.
1week later Brian has explain and showen what he had to do to survive back when he was by himself.When Brian,Bear and the crew where sitting beside the roring fire Brian noticed a change in the wind then he looked around and saw the bear but it had changed it had this killer look in its eyes,Brian told Bear and his team to go some where safe while Brian keeped the bear busy,Bear said to meet us up at the plane.Brian walked back as the bear came closer then he was backed up by a tree he felt something and looked down it was his bow and two arrows he picked it up and fired one it missed then the bear got up on its back feet then Brian hit one of the paws in the air.Then Brian run to the plane he saw that the plane was taking off and run after it with the bear behide him he was just a meter away from the plane and jumped Bear grabed his hand and said your our new camera man.
by Liban the man
As the filming began Brian and bear took a trip to Brian’s shelter to determine who would sleep where and what they would catch for food and bear began to explain the situation he has chosen to go in to for the starting of the documentary also including introducing Brian. While Brian was happy that his parents could finally understand what he had gone through he was sad because he was stuck in the void of loneliness but he wasn’t lonely that was the bright side for Brian.
ReplyDeleteBrian had gained skills from his experience and now being with his idol he could learn more about chances of survival but bear was irritating too because he told stories about the fact he had never actually peed in a toilet and trying to be all 'motivational speaker' and blabbered on and on like (this is real quotes for information on Bear) "The difference between ordinary and extra-ordinary is so often just simply that little word - extra. And for me, I had always grown up with the belief that if someone succeeds it is because they are brilliant or talented or just better than me… and the more of these words I heard the smaller I always felt! But the truth is often very different… and for me to learn that ordinary me can achieve something extra-ordinary by giving that little bit extra, when everyone else gives up, meant the world to me and I really clung to it…" (which is a real quote from Bear Grylls) (and no that does not count in my word count!) and that (on how he got his nickname) ‘Bear is an old nickname I've had since I was about half an hour old. And it's kind of stuck.’ And that apparently hes pathetic because on which is worse, being really hot or really cold) Being really cold. I have been unfortunate enough to spend much of my life being really cold, and I lie at home now in a hot bath and complain to my wife that there’s not enough hot water. She says, ‘If people could know how pathetic you really are.’
And that bored Brian
I'm concerned Mrs Young not many have posted and its Thursday
ReplyDeleteone word:
RESPONSIBILITY
Brian sat quietly, taken by surprise by a peace he had not known for a long time and let the canoe drift forward along the lily pads. To his right was the shore line of a small lake he had flown into an hour earlier. When Brian hits the shoreline with his feet he tells bear grylls to come over here. They get some food for a day and try to get something going.
ReplyDeleteBrian tries to remember what he did to start a fire they sit down and start saying ideas like using the hatchet then it starts coming back to Brian he finds what he used to begin the fire but then he made a mistake like the first time he tried to start a fire. After that he learnt of his mistake and then he made a fire bear grylls clapped and said well done mate
By Zac
only a couple more people yay!
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The Return.
ReplyDeleteWow, Bear come look at this my bow and arrow is still here and so is my spear. And this is the exact pond where I used to do my fishing. When ever I would shoot my bow into the pond to catch my fish the bow would always go on a angle. When I caught my first fish I roasted it on the fire until the skin was crispy and flaky, and the meat was moist and tender. When I took my first bite it was like I like I landed in heaven. Hey Bear come look the plane that I had my crash in is still here. In my last days here I got all the survival packs out and ate them all, man was it delicious.
Well Brian if you find rotten logs like this you will be sure to find big fat juicy caterpillar look a like bugs and heaps of other ones as well. I love these big fat juicy ones they are the best but sometimes they have flam inside of them. There was one time when I was in Ireland and I was trying to wrestle down a massive as wild pig. Then I finally got the big meaty wild pig from behind and stabbed it on the wild pigs back. Well Brian over these last 10 days I have taught you some things and you have taught me some things but now we got to go back to where we came from. I will see you in 5 years time and maybe we can teach each other some more survival skills.
When Brian got home to his wife and kids he started to get mail from bear every month. Brian was collecting new skills every time Bear gave him mail.
By Jope 304 words
(Hatchet the return)
ReplyDeleteAfter a years ago as Brian has been rescued.As Brian sat down with Bear Grylls beside he was thinking that he wants to go back to the Canadian forest he also wanted that someone could come with him.Brian's mum allows him to go back to the Canadian forest.Brian and Bear Grylls was talking about the past time about what happen to Brian's plane crash as they were in the plane.
Finally Brian and Bear Grylls reached the land they were walking for a while Brian saw the shelter that he made the last time and they stayed there.2 hours later Brian and Bear was hunting for food they found a lake and there were a lots of fish in there they took a 3 fish for their dinner they make a fire and cook the fish in there.Mean while Brian and Bear went inside the shelter and sleep.
The next day Bear wondered if there is someone that we'll rescue them and he told it to Brian about that.Bear told Brian about his adventure and he teach it to Brian.When Bear was talking to him Brian also got a new skills from Bear after that they where exploring all the places about 1 week.Brian and Bear were now finding how to be rescued in there.Bear you got any idea?Brian said.Just wait.Bear said.They climb up in the mountain and they wait until it was dark a while ago it was a little bit of dark and they saw a plane they put a fire for signal they pilot saw them and it goes down Brian and Bear went inside to the plane they were very happy that someone rescue them.The plane was flying the,Brian felt something that he felt the last time about the plane crash suddenly he smell something(ewhh smelly)wait thats what I smell the last time I was on the plane and the pilot got a heart atacck.The plane suddenly goes down Brian was frightened he says that the plane crash again.Bear walking to the pilot seat(the pilot is dead)1 minute.......BOOOOSSSHHH!!!
To be continued....
By:Micah
The return…
ReplyDeleteAs Brian smells the fresh warm air in and out, Brian thinks about what would have happened if he hadn’t been saved. Brian is with Bear Grills, Brian slowly points out the window of the helicopter to point to where the island is for the pilot to land. Once they landed Brian and Bear hope out and look around, Brian had remembered all the trees and bushes that he had to live beside. Bear had wondered why he had never seen this island before out of all the places he had been to he had never been to this one. They both start to unpack well watching the helicopter fly away; they both unpack and realize that they are going to be here for six days. Brian makes sure he has everything before he goes and shows Bear around and explore around.
The next two days they both are living in the island going through all the things Brian went through. Bear is enjoying the adventure that he is having with Brian and is thinking about bringing Brian on to his shows some time. Brian and Bear both sit down and talk, they are thinking about staying an extra day to explore more. Three days later they had both decided to stay a extra day or two. Brian and Bear both have had a lot of good times but the last day they both also decided to relax and het ready to pack and leave. Last day they arrived home and said there good byes and Bear asked Brian to come on to his show. Brian replied with a big YES!!
The end …
By Frances Mounga
279 words ! :)
ReplyDeleteBrian was in the Canadian forest with Bear Grylls and another man called Dylan. Bear Grylls was there to help if anything was wrong. But Dylan was taking notes. Bear Grylls took a knife and his rug sack as brian took his hatchet. On day on Brian, Dylan and Bear went out looking out for wood for there fire they take all the wood back to the camp to builed a shelter and to keep the fire on the whole night. Day two it was minus seven and it was snowing so Brian went up to the mountain to put his signal fire but first Brian needs to move all the snow and make a hut for the wood and the signal fire so there is lots of smoke. Brian had finished with the signal fire and headed back to the camp and Bear said lets go down the dam and try find some water or food but they didn't find food or water just Brians water bottle.
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Chapter 1
ReplyDeleteThe warm air of the Canadian forest was all brian felt at that momment when he reached the location of were the plane crashed that Dreadful day. Brian wondered towords it and asked his friend Cody "were the plane has gone have they taken it" Brian questioned "i think theyt took it to some labratory to do some forensics on it to seen how long you were out here for?" replied Cody. Brian stared at Cody then at the crash site brian thought to him self "what were to happoned if they never found me but then the boat they were on started to shake like it was shoved by something. Quickly brian cheacked for damage and luckily for them no holes, Then cody saw a shadow underneth them just as he could see it SMACK!!!!! the boat was violently throwed back and fro Then Cody fell in the freezing water and he nearly reached the boat when he was pulled under because of the beast and thats all Brian saw of Cody again.
Chapter 2
By Michael
Brian sat quitly,taken by a peace he had not known for a long time,and let the canoe drift forward along the lily pads.to his right was the shore line of a small lake he had flown into an hour ago.He sat there at the edge of the canoe watching the birds chirpping and flying from branch to branch.This was it ,it was the kind of place Brian wanted to call home,leaving the concret jungles of the normal world he had returned to the wild jungles where he felt cumfortable.This time he wasnt alone,John Williams Green,the man who had saved his life would acompany him on his journey.John would gaze very carefully at Brian,looking at every detail and movements and then he would jot down all of this in his notebook.Brian had no idea why he did this,he was only a pilot wasnt he,he would have asked several times getting no answer.Beming down the heat of the sun would sweep over Brian making him want to rest his eyes for a while,so he did,thinking John would be fine alone.Several hours later Brian woke up to a crash.Looking around in panice,he didnt see John ,the boat was fine but where was John.He looked and called out,but nothing movedand no sound was heard.A cold shiver went down hie spine,this was apaart of the lake he hadent yet visited.blocking the heat,the tall trees stode around the lake,so close to the edge it would seem like it would fall on you.Knowing that what ever happens he must go and save his friend.Full of courage and hope he stode out onto the shore line,making sure to tie the canoe to a tree.Taking a couple of steps into the forest,he desided to have one more look in the lake.To bad,a reptile so big he had forgotten its name.Slithering out of the water like a snake,to open up its wide mouth,letting all his sharp edged covered in blood,teeth be seen.could this be the end...
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Soon we jumped off the boat then started to fish. Spear fishing didn't work so we made a nother bow and arrow. This is when we got back to shore. As we are fishing and searching for some wood we find the hutjust sitting there how I left it and not crumbleing nothing. So we just stay the night. The moose returns and starts to ram the place so we kill it, with a spear and our bows. My companion is LT Mayerhoff,he is incompitent and impationt. I have to train him to start acting like me but him being U.S millitry it will be hard to train him as a civillian. We stumble across a wild boar and I have to save him from himself. But he kills it. We go back to the desperote hut and stay the way I did but for a week. He didn't like it but I did and he was like so "aa aa I'm leaving'.
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“This is Brian and I am about to anchor back at the coast of the Canadian Rockies. With me I have Jackson Newman. I am here to get back my hatchet I never got from the campers who rescued me.”
ReplyDeleteBrian has now anchored at the Canadian Rockies and looks out at the area with a pair of binoculars. He got in a row boat and then he saw a couple of wolves. One as white as snow. The other one as black as your darkest nightmare.
It’s good to be back. After two and a half days of traveling. He finally reached the area of which he crashed. The hut was different and the raft different too. But one particular thing caught his eyes the fire was going. Then in a flash of darkness, a young boy swung from a vine and sliced through Jackson’s cheek. His name was Ryan and he had Brian’s hatchet he grabbed it and he kept it. The next couple of days they searched and looked around then they left for the ship.
Brian is in the Canadian Forest with his best mate Bear Grill, they had to go and do some research on the Canadian forest, because the scientists don’t know about this forest, they haven’t done much research on it before.
ReplyDeleteBear grills is in the helicopter with Brian and they are sitting on the edge of the helicopter ready to jump. They counted to three but Brian had not done this before. They then jumped off the big helicopter with excitement, wooosh! The parachute came out rapidly… Brian was flying down with emotive thrill.
Suddenly they approached the bottom of the hills and started to get into the forest. And suddenly a big, black staunch bear came storming up behind them with a big ROAR. To find out more read the return.
Klayton
Beside the lake he thought the times when he was in his home. Brian was rescued by in the land and came home. He tried to go back to normal, but he couldn’t. on the first day, it seemed that everything was good because he could eat what he wanted and any fries and mosquitoes didn’t prevent him from sleeping comfortably. On the second, third….eighth day all the things were more wonderful than in island. However he started missed the island. He went to the school where the teachers scolding and student were talking. Out of the school window, cars and people were passing by. At the moment some birds came to him and they looked free. He realized that he is missing such freedom.
ReplyDeleteOn returning home, he went straight to the bed, thing of memories of his happy times in the island even through life was hard. He wanted be back there. At last he decided to leave for the wild but free island. That was how he could came back to island. He was happy to be back here. In wild island he was happy. emily