one beautiful Wednesday , the sun was shining as a normal Christchurch morning and on that morning it was the day of Kim's school camp , she woke up bright and early and was ready and packed for her trip to Hanmer springs. The morning she got to school everyone was all ready like she was all her friends were very exited like the rest of the class , it hit 9:00am and it was time for everyone to hope into there cars , Kim had hoped into her favorite teachers car miss palms and two other students. Once they had arrived it was just about 11:30am so as everyone had jumped out of their cars they were in to get some fresh air and to have there morning tea. Kim wasn't very hungry as the rest of the class was because her and her family had a big breakfast for there good byes to her. So she had sat next to the new teacher named Mr D he seemed very strange but Kim didn't want to leave clueless so she HAD to ask questions... Well she had asked him one million questions she had to go back into the car and they all had to go to where they were staying , she didn't no anything about this camp because this was her very first camp. Once they got there and all students were unpacked and everything they started on the activity's set for them. The day had gone so fast and everyone had tuns of fun that it was time for bed. That night it was about 10:00pm in the night and Kim had to go to the toilet so she got up and went but as soon as she open the door there was Mr D standing there as if her was going to come in anyways. Mr D was ...
It was the 23rd of November 2011 and a school was going to camp and no one knew what was going to happen except for one. They were all packed and ready to go in the cars and driving off to Hanmer Springs for camp they thought it was going fun but it isn’t going to be.
It was starting to get dark and Mr Irving was chasing down his victims it started with the teachers and parents then taking the children one by one no one knew. Then chonny had to go to the toilet and saw Mrs. Young and conner’s dad eating Ethan and enjoying it a lot. Then chonny ran away without a sound and ran to his bunk room and told everyone. After chonny told everyone, they locked their bunkroom doors and barricaded the doors with the beds and keeped two for sleeping. They had an idea that they should destroy the zombies and live on without that scary witnessing. It was the last day of camp but not the last day of survival so they got weapons and split up into teams making traps till late dawn at 8 till 9 pm then finishing at 4 to 6 am it was war! The teams were a mix of room 10 and 7 together with also Belac, Chonny, Vilar and Levi. The war went on four ages then it finished on the 29th of June 2018. They thought they killed them all but they didn’t know that Mr. Irving was the controller and the war was still on and no one knew.
Don’t trust anybody you don’t know what or who they might be.
At precisely 8:48 am on a stormy Wednesday morning, Room 10 And Room 7 departed for what was thought to be a wonderful Hanmer springs camp but that all changed, as they arrived at the camp a eeriness filled the air and the storm let off two humungous bolts of fork lightning, the classes filled the bunkrooms and stayed inside all day to wait out the storm. That night every bunk room shook waking all the students occupying them, the reason behind the shaken bunkrooms was unknown and many reports came pouring in to the adults on the camp. The next day came and the sun was shining and all occupants on the camp applied their sunscreen, once again the camp filled with horror as the other schools in Hanmer springs angrily growled and groaned with the greenest of faces and plunged to the ground, they were all sick from the horrible food they were served the night before RPS was the only school still on their feet and hoping for a better day. As the day widened nobody was sure what they would experience on the activities but they hoped for it to be good. The first activity was ‘Team initiative challenges’ A new girl called Karen was attending this camp with Riccarton Primary and at the first activity at 3:30(ish) Karen got the shock of her life in the clouds they read ‘you better watch out someone is out to get you’ She asked Micah and Kris if they saw it but they said they could only see a little bunny and that’s it. At the second activity (tree climbing) Karen found she was warned again a small carving in the top of the old tree it read ‘you should’ve listened now it’s a riot after you –dead or alive … Karen!’ she was really scared now and went running to her older sister Sarah “help , help someone is after me” she creamed with terror,her sister thought she was nuts but on the last night at the x-factor performance she found that outside were flashing lights coming from the tree in the woods and then a huge army of disfigured man men came limping from the depths of the forest,flames emerged and she woke up from her tattered bed, shaking,sweating,heart racing,she was alone and the bunkroom shook harder than the last time…
From that night on no-one knew what actually happened to Karen,she never returned home….
Can you come up with a ending to my story?
A encouraging comment- Come on team its Wednesday what have you been doing? Lets really hope this week they have written them just not posted.
P.S thanks Mrs Young for letting me share my stories on the blog! Its fun
One dark misty Wednesday night , Riccarton Primary School was at Hanmer Springs Forestry Camp, they shared the camp with Branston Intermediate. One little boy sleep walked from Branston intermediate. But he wasn't any ordinary sleep walker , he slept walked with knives. That night he stabbed a boy from Riccarton Primary , the boys name was Nishiel. The people in his bunk room was Klayton , Zac and Asher. Klayton cried like a little girl , Zac pissed hid pants and Asher died because he was so scared.
Thursday: That Thursday night some one decided to go for a mid-night swim (Christian.) The little boy was out again , Christian died and it wasn't only him he stabbed all the teachers and majority of the kids there were a few kids from Branston and the kids left from Riccarton were Vehar , Kris , Keziah , Caleb and Brianna. They were all scared! Didn't know what to do? All of them came together , they worked all day preparing for that night making plans and weapons. The night came they were all scared to death! Will they make it!? Who knows?
Friday Night! The last night! They were prepared , weapons and all. Vehar was Praying , he said "Oh lord please help us in this situation lord, we need as much help as we can get lord then Keziah interrupted and said grow up and be a man! He stopped and said amen! then tears started to dribble down the side of his face . He wiped them and grew stronger. The weird thing was it was 5 against 1 and the five were scared....They saved the day and lived at Hanmer springs camp because they had no way of getting home.
The plan -break all the knives -call Tommys Mother (the killer) -Have something to eat -Then sleep. Total words : 305
The flames eagerly licked the smoking smores as they roasted on a stick. “Where are we Mason? Look what happens when we trust you with the map, biggest mistake of my life,” grunted Tanith. “Just be thankful for what we have, ok? We should consider ourselves lucky that we chose to travel with our backpacks.” retorted Mason who slyly dodged the blame. Tanith strode off moaning to herself while gathering useful looking bits of firewood to feed the hungry fire. Cosmos sat and said nothing. The trio were lost deep in the woods while on their way to a supposedly popular campsite. Unfortunately, it didn’t turn out as they had planned.
1 HOUR LATER…
“What was that? I swear I saw some kind of black animal… a black dog.” whispered Mason. “Umm... don’t black dogs signify death? Like someone you know is going to die…?” stuttered Tanith, her eyes wide with fear. Then, before Mason could react a rustling noise abruptly stirred within the bushes. Mason put a finger to his mouth and extinguished the bright flames while hastily grabbing his torch out of his backpack. He signalled for his two friends to gather alongside him, “Hello? Who’s there? Come out now.” He croaked ignoring the break in his voice. Then suddenly a fearsome creature with indescribable features emerged from the bushes. Horns sprouted out of its elbows and its fur was pitch black, excluding the gray splotch on its chest. It was like a mutation of an ordinary wolf… in simple words it was a monster. Its actions were ruthless; it was wildly swinging its claws about, careless of what would be the result. “MASON!” Tanith screamed and Cosmos showed a rare swirl of emotion on his face. Mason clutched his chest as blood came squirting out, his face in a petrified state. The world seemed to travel in slow motion as he collapsed to the ground. The beast, obviously satisfied with its kill, grabbed Mason and started to eat him alive. It was truly a gruesome sight; something even Cosmos couldn’t bear. He gritted his teeth and grabbed Tanith who was now screaming with tears streaming down her face; Cosmos knew that if they waited the beast would take them next, so he ran. Ignoring the shouts and screams from Tanith he pulled her on until they came to a clearing. He could see a road! “Mason, Mason,” sobbed Tanith as she pulled away from his hold, she fell to her knees and wept. Cosmos was in shock too, the experience was so vivid in his head and it kept replaying in his mind. He wanted to scream and shout and cry, but he contained it; listening to his heart beat wildly in his chest. Slowly, he opened his backpack and took some matches out. “Wha- what are you doing?” asked Tanith who’s sleeves were soaked with tears. Ignoring her, Cosmos carried on. He lit several matches and dropped them each in front of three trees that were standing before them. Rapidly, the flames spread engulfing everything in their path. Hands clenched, Cosmos turned around and walked. Walked without a second glance at the horrid place which bred the ruthless beast.
It was the 23 of Novemeber 8:00am and it was the day of riccarton Primary school's year 7&8 camp day.Their camp was heild at Hanmer Springs, the place where people say "thats where the gosht haunts",thats the place where kids disapper". But we Riccarton kids think that they are just trying to put us off!but it did for some!But it doesn't matter now, at least im going. We were all at school putting our lagageu onto the trailer. As we were done we all got into the cars and away to Hanmer Springs we go. As we were getting closer and closer to Hanmer Springs i could scenece some sort of darkness and eerily noises. But when we got down the road Mrs young stops the car. We asked her "why did you stop?" She said "because there is someone standing in the middle of the road". As we looked closely we couldnt see it but we could fell someone eagerly breathing down our backs. We turned around to see who or what it is and we see a man with blood dripping down his body! we scream and then he disappered. We kept driving our way to Hanmer Springs. When we got there everyone hoped out of the the car frightened and told all their friends what happened. But one kid stayed in the car it was Christan Adams. He was do frightened he went all quiet and didn't tell anyone. As the first night had come and it was 12:00pm Christab Adams disobyed the rules no one new what was wrong with him. But that night he went swimming in the hot pools.The next day Christan was gone and he disappered but then Kris saw bloody footprints so she followed it and found a lot of blood in the hot pool with a smiley face and it said" YOUR NEXT". So Kris screamed and every one made there way towards her but they couldn't see what she saw, it disappered. She lookedback and they were telling the truth. But that hole day they went looking for Christan. But no one new where he was. Night 2 Kris was too sceared to go to sleep so she didn't. She went to find out more about what happened to Christan Adams. She sneaked into the video room and wathced all the videos and lucky lats was the one whereChristan goes missing.She watched it and she saw how the bloody footprints got there. But as Kris kept looking into it, it turns out that the blood isn't realy Christans its "JOPE'S". Every night at 12:00pm something weired would happen to him. He would get up and go some where. But one night Klayton got up at 12:00pm and went to the toilet and the next morning jope pretended to find him dead in the toilet. But it all started to add up Jope was the killer, it all made scenece to kris someone would disapper at12:00pm and thats when Jope would always get up and act all different around people. Everyone found out about it and they called the police. The police took Jope away but just befor they took him he looked at Kris and said" YOU NEXT"............
So you think camps are a happy fun place do you? Let me tell you my story
It was the first night of camp and it was going great we had so much fun so it was around midnight and Sohillah, Jamin, Nofoa and I were lying in our bunkroom beds asleep until suddenly we were awakened by rustling and a girly shriek of terror. “what was that” I asked in distress . Jamin replied with “bushes and wind and some girl probably got a nightmare dummy”. So we went to sleep. In the morning everyone was stressing out apparently Vehar had gone missing it was his girly scream we had heard last night . there was a search party looking for him it was free time Zac, Jamin, Helena, Brianna, Michael, Jackson, Sohillah, Liban, Nofoa and I were playing tag when suddenly Zac stopped running under a tree we all went up to him to see what was wrong he said “look up” we looked I shirked in terror when I saw Vehar the teacher came running they took him to hospital the doctors said he was dead. Someone came to check out his body they said his brain was sucked dry but noone knew how …..
OMG CAMP!!! , can’t wait, and the camp is tomorrow I’m so excited. Next day all of my class arrived at Kokire. All of my class explored around Kokire . When we came back my parents and my best friends dad. I was so happy that my parents came. But Alice wasn’t that happy because she didn’t like her dad after her mum died. Alice’s dad has mental problems and the dad hates Alice that was Alices step dad they never get along. The next night everyone was asleep then I heard someone opening the door so I went outside and check who It was and I saw Alice sleep walking then I saw her walking towards where the mountain bikes were, I called her name out loud but she didn’t hear me. She never have sleep walk when she goes to camp. I called her name again but she didn’t hear me , she just ride her bike up on the mountain so I decided to follow her up to the mountain .That night their was a full moon. Up on the mountain Alice stopped riding the bike, I tried to wake her up but she didn’t wake up. So I decide to carry her back to the camp ground then not long ago their was a strange noise came out of nowhere, I was so scared because it was only me and Alice was still asleep then one minute later a wolf jumped out of nowhere and started killing Alice, I cried and ran all the way to the camp ground and started to wake up my parents they said what happen so I said Alice died a wolf killed her .After I told my parents I went and told Alices dad but he wasn’t their. A few days later all of my class my parents and Alices dad came to Alices frenula my tears were going down so hard. But I didn’t know who actually killed Alice but I’m searching for clues for her deaf.
t Hanmer forestry camp a teacher goes in to the woods and comes out as frieza.
This all took place in the 21rst age on the 11/11/2011. There is nothing wrong with this transformation that is until…
AAAAHHHHHHH!!!! “boys boys, come help us” yelled out the girls. <3 hours earlier> “All boys and girls are having fun on the trees why don’t we go pig hunting” said Mrs Y to Leov and Mr T. so they went hunting they got pigs human and animal types plus the human pig weapons and tools. It got to bed time and Frieza got hungry , so she went into her room but when 0930 came along well at the start is what happens. But then night 2 comes around and she goes for the boys. Thank the lord I was in with Goku and Gohan. Well the boys were able to put up a fight but when we awoke to the racket it was too late. We had failed to save the girls and the boys. Night 3 was quiet but too quiet for my liking. Night 4 rolls over and here I am with the z sword waiting to kill frieza. She came to me and started to fight and I put up a fight but frieza had the upper hand of ki blasts so I had to strike the chest then 1 blow to the neck and severed her neck. So night 5 was quiet for my crew and the staff but the moon makes gohan transform to an ape. So me and goku destroy it with goku having kamehameha and me and an rpg with extra capabilities. The moon goes bang!!!!!BBBBLLLLAAAAMMMBOOOOOOOOOMMMM!!!!!!! But he doesn’t change back for another five minutes. That’s all right Mrs Y came back to life as frieza so we just leave her to die.
Well life goes on Liban, Sohillah, Ethan, Jamin, Micah, Klayton, kris and Zac all had parents come in and call authorities but get nowhere. So this story ends like all others everyone dies in 50 years it’s alright nothing big comes around.
He smiled as he sipped at his coffee. It had been an excellent hike. He was glad his friend had recommended coming to the Hanging Hills in Connecticut; not the first place that had come to his mind when considering a vacation. But it was beautiful here. When his friend arrived tomorrow they would tackle some of the more challenging terrain.
“Did you have a nice hike?” asked the innkeeper as she refilled his cup.
“Yes indeed. I had some unexpected company,” he said with a smile.
“Really? I thought you were the only one crazy enough to go hiking in the rain,” she teased.
“It was a little black dog,” he said. “Cute fellow. Followed me all the way up the mountain and down again.”
He looked up from his coffee to see the innkeeper’s face had gone pale.
“A black dog?” she asked. “That’s not good.”
“Why not?”
“We have a saying around here,” she replied. “’And if a man shall meet the Black Dog once, it shall be for joy; and if twice, it shall be for sorrow; and the third time, he shall die.’” He laughed. “That’s just superstition.”
“That’s what Mr. Pynchon said. He saw the black dog twice. The second time he saw the dog, the friend he was climbing with fell to his death. And later, Mr. Pynchon decided to climb the same mountain, and he died too. Everyone here believes he saw the dog just before he fell.”
“Nonsense. It was just a cute stray,” he said uneasily. She shrugged and took the coffee pot over to her other customers.
His friend arrived the next morning and they both laughed about the story of the black dog. They set out on their climb. About halfway up the mountain, he looked up and saw the black dog.
“There’s the dog,” he called to his friend.
And then his foot slipped and he plunged down the side of the hill, desperately grabbing at saplings and rocks, trying to halt his descent. It seemed to take forever for him to stop sliding. There was a stabbing pain in his leg. When he looked at it, his head swimming, it was bent at an odd angle. They had to send in a mountain rescue team to get him down. At the hospital, they told him his leg was broken in two places and he was very lucky it wasn’t worse.
“You know, that was a very strange fall,” said his friend uneasily. “You don’t really think it had anything to do with that black dog?”
He looked down at the cast that extended all the way up to his hip.
“I don’t know. But I don’t really want to find out. Next time, let’s go to Colorado.”
"Amy"Amy" where are you? Please come out! The first day of camp and my sister is missing , where could she have gone? Everyone had rest to bed for the early wake up tomorrow. But it was creepy that I had been to the bathroom and came back and she has disappeared. At first I had thought this was a joke but I thought about it , Amy hates the dark. I held my torch as tight as I could flashing it to everything that moves. I know i may be crazy but i had felt something softly pull me back , or it was just the wind. But a small voice came into my head i turned around to see if anyone was there ... No sign of anyone , I hear a big loud scream i run and follow it , its leading me to the biggest forest at this camp. It was about 10:00pm and everyone was fast asleep.
4 hours later...
I was still on the search for Amy , as i walked I had pictures popping in my head , as i started to get dizzier and dizzier every time a picture comes and goes as fast as it can. All i remember is i fall to the ground I see a clear picture of some one running out behind the trees. I no it looks like the new teacher Mr Dean. He stood there as I past out slowly my whole mind was blank nothing to be seen ...
2 hours later...
My eyes slowly start to open as i can see nothing but Mr D standing there watching me as I wake up. I fully open my eyes and I can see Amy , she looks sore and she had cuts on her face I take one more look around then geez at Mr D , he asks me if um feeling OK ? I reply and tell him to let us go. He doesn't look like we had a chance on getting away from him. Amy is giving me hand signals like she was scared and he was gonna kill us. I use all my strength to stand up and sit back down next to Amy. Mr D walk out and slams the door in anger. Amy and I slowly help each other up and look around , i walk up to the glass window , i see my refection and my black everything , every bit of it was black , I look at my self and stare i also to have cuts on my face and feel very sore. Every part of my body had been hurt. Amy and I both start feeling sick again , my head felt like it was going to explode. We see each other both fall to the ground...
(RING RING RING)... My alarm had gone off , it was all a dream few! I walk into Amy's room she wasn't there I look every where in the house , i even try calling her phone. All her bags where still here so she couldn't have gone and left to camp already. Someone knocks on the door I run down stairs and open the door , It was Mr D...
Room 10 & 7 were all hyped up and excited to go to Hanmer Springs Camp all together for the year 8s last year. All they could think about was the activities and groups for the bunk rooms. Room 10 was the smart and strong class and was always on top but room 7 was not. Room10 first left to camp but a boy from room 10 was a traitor no won knows but he will disobey and betray them.
Day 1 As bunk rooms were set people wondered why they were placed in these rooms not because the disliked them just that they never thought about it and it surprised them. Kris, Jamin and Brianna settled in, by 10pm they were all asleep. But they all woke up at the same time of 2am and heard a noise they had a look outside it was a boy, but it was to dark to see him he was talking to some other boys (room 7 boys) the girls sneaked out and listened they were talking about killing room 10 pupils because they were sick of room 10 out shining them. The girls ran off and told the others they all had a plan and waited for anything to happen, but they all fell asleep at 4am.
Day 2 All of the girls in room 10 woke up at 8am in a room with no doors or windows but one light at the top of the ceiling. They were all confused but scared and wondered why are they in here. But then they had a look around Jamin was gone, nowhere to be seen. The soon realized she had been taken away somewhere. Nuusila found a note on the wall, it said: Bad always get revenge on the good, they were all scared but continued on reading: Jamin has gone to heaven and someone with brown frizz hair but can be straitened. They all looked at Franky and said your next. She started to scream and cry softly but it wasn’t helping. They all new that the next night they had to protect her. But that night the loved friend was gone.
Day 3 Kris, Brianna, Nuusila, Nofoa and Keziah waited but then Nofoa found something it was a crack in the wall it was fake she could open it like a door. They all ran out and all of a sudden they see room 7 and a boy but hes turned around they can’t see him, they set up a trap to kill us because they knew we got out. So room 10 made a plan.
What happened was room 7 all got gassed in the kitchen and died and room 10 walked away like they knew nothing but they never found Jamin or Franky. Also the boys came out alive and one boy from room 10 was dead. ( Zach )
Camp horror story “Good night”, yarned Kate I fell asleep straight away as the lights switched of in the noiseless room. Outside I could hear owl’s morning and wind blowing through opened cracks, as it whistles through the lonely night at, Hamner Springs camp. I dreamt of some odd dream that came with sorrow and sadness. So I will carry on with my dream, I was walking along a gravel path through the depths of the forest. Dark lonely and scary, I carried on I walked slowly finding my way back to the camp site. I feel a shiver down my back. Suddenly I heard a noise, I was terrified so I ran straight ahead of me, I felt dizzy, my vision stared to blur and I fainted.
3 hours later: I woke up adjusting my eyes to where I was, I was Surrounded by shelves and shelves of poisons, my eye caught one that said “ KILLING POISON.” I just realized that I was trapped in a iron, steel cage. As I fail to escape a big lady came stomping in and steered at me. She had sharp pointy vampire teeth with fresh meat sticking at the tip of her tooth, a smell coming from the kitchen wanted me to throw up, it smelt like dead cats blood. I steered back at the lady she wore a apron covered in blood, her was grey and old, her face was ugly and terrible and disturbing. The woman opened the cage where I was, before I knew it I was screaming but that didn’t last long. I got eaten by the woman. Someone poured water on me I screamed because I thought it was blood , But it was just my friend Kate pouring water on me to wake me up. The End Helena 303 words
"Jamie, Jane this is cabin #6," said Lisa (our camp counsellor). Six my unlucky number. Jane and I were at our first sleep over camp. This was not a good way to start I thought, as Lisa opened the door. "This is the main floor. It has the kitchen and T.V.," she said as we stepped inside. I looked across the room. In a far corner there was a big ladder. I walked over to it and climbed up. I heard a distant voice behind me say, "This is the loft where the older girls sleep." The younger kids sleep in the main house and the counsellors sleep in their own cabins. The loft consisted of four hay stuffed mattresses and two candles. In one corner of the room there was a huge window. "I will leave you girls to get settled. When you are finished meet me in the dining room." When Lisa disappeared I flopped down on the nearest bed which happened to be the one next to the window. Jane spread her sleeping bag on the bed next to me. A few minutes later two girls came into the loft. One's name was Maggie. She had blond hair and green eyes. The other was Meghan. She had brown hair and blue eyes. She was a little plump. I lay on my bed in the dark. Everyone was asleep. Something under my bed was keeping me up. Finally I decided to have a look. Maybe a poor mouse had gotten stuck. When I lifted the bed there was a big trap door planted beneath. I looked for a way to open it. There was only a little metal ring. It took all my strength to pull it up. It was not a passage instead it was a little storage place. I reached in to see if there was anything left. I grasped a piece of paper and drew it out. The paper turned out to be an envelope. I opened it. Inside there was a piece of paper. The paper was taped together and when I opened it a locket fell to the floor. I picked it up and examined it. The locket was on a very pretty gold chain. It must have been left by another girl I thought as I opened the note. I stopped dead. In someone's blood a person had printed, "Free Me ! This Means You Jamie Dunwood!" I gasped and looked down at the locket. When I opened it inside was a picture of a pretty dark haired girl. I had no idea who she was. In fact I had never seen her in my life. Suddenly the door slammed shut. It was Lisa. Quickly I shoved my bed over the hole and jumped in. I waited. No one came. I looked out the window. Someone dressed in white was streaking towards the beach. One of the little kids had been spying on me. I raced down the ladder and out the door. I ran after the white figure and caught up to it right by the water. When it turned around I saw to my horror that it was the same girl on the locket except she was white and I could see through her. I screamed loudly and Jane came running. "What's wrong Jamie?" "The, the, it's a ghost! It was here!" I turned around and pointed to the place where the ghost had been but it was gone. "What was there?" Jane asked as we walked back to the cabin! "Nothing Jane , it was just my imagination," I said. "Let's get inside before Lisa realizes that we are gone!"
it was going to turn out to be a wonderful but it WASN'T.....
so room 10 were heading to hamner springs for camp but sopme students noticed some strange things just as they were going there. When they got out of the cars and vans they thought they would be staying in cabins or bunkromms instead the teachers put them in tents and the teachers got the bunkrooms the little witc -um anywayso we had to stay out side which was okay except for the part about the coldness of the place it was like sleeping in the arctic so thats the first day good night ...
Day 2
so it's 7:30 in the morning the teachers all can in and set off a really loud alarm that could have shaken a house but somehow it didn't well we had breakfast toast with butter on it while the teachers get egg and bacon which annoyed the other fellow students but the activites should be fun. I regreet saying that when we had to climb the tree the teachers gave us no safty harnest or helmet just some rope and for the mini game of rugby we had a head count and ethan was missing but no one cared but what else was missing was one of the teachers but ethan might have got in trouble and was pulled out again anyway the games were fun and we were all tired but for some reasons the teachers split us up and put us in dirrent places of hamner and the scary part was that it was night time we should be in bed but the split us up and place uss every where then they said to go and look for more people through the area at midnight
12:01!!!
ok its just past midnight i am on top of conical hill and am now heading down when i see a fait glow in the area below me and the a howl like not a dog but a wolf howl and thats when i worry but then someone runs up to me and i see it's it's liban and then it doesn't matter as he spots me and askes if I've seen anyone else but of cours nope havn't so me and liban walked down conical hill then suddenlywe spot zac by the tree near the bottom and he is freaking out but when he see's us he walks over as he reached us i hear the ticking of grears moving and the i accidently grab zac and pull him in frount of the tree beside me and vii vii vii vii and zac falls into the ground and i realised i killed him sweat i thought then i remembered it was zac sweat anyway i think the teachers are trying to kill us.
Day 3
me and liban had made through the night but i think we wer e the only survivers then i realise liben hadn't talked since i found him and just as i turned around shing ow that hurt uhhh liban how could you uhhhh...
On the 1 of December everybody was very excited because they were going to the best horror camp for boys. The camp was located on the east coast of England. All the boys thought it was all a joke but they don’t know is that there used to be an old school there and that the old principle was murdered.
When we arrived at the camp site it started pouring down with rain. While the kids were just settling they all saw that Jimmy was missing and then they all heard a massive as bang then they all started getting scared so then Nick went and checked the toilets and nick saw that Jimmy was dead with a piece of chocolate cake in his mouth. After lunch every body had free time. At the camp they had everything they had a massive as playground, go carts, a big forest for orientation and a lot of other things as well. After free time it was time for dinner. At dinner all the boys were very scared. They were all thinking about who killed Jimmy. Everybody was being interviewed by the police. During the night time Zac went missing, they were all really scared so they all wanted to go home so that was the plan. When they arrived back at school they were in a hurry to get home. On Monday only nick turned up to school the rest had sadly passed away then suddenly…..
23rd of November Riccarton Primary School’s year8 and year7 students are exciting about going to camp. 8 o clock finally we start to pack the bag and start to get on the bus.. and than teachers told them to sit and count the number of student. “OK” Mrs. Young said, now we can go now!! 2hour later finally we arrive at hammer spring and we check our friends or our bags, but there have one problem where is Ethan? We was really worry that he is gone we call to other teachers or one of the bus that didn’t arrived yet. Finally we found Ethan and he was at other bus.. But we are all tired and also we are hungry.. so we pack our bag to our room fast and eat our lunch, it was little bit late but it was best lunch time that I never have before. My room was L3 and my room mates was 4 girls,, second day of camp we done Mt. biking, tree climbing and hot pool swimming first we done Mt biking and it was so~~ great and it feels like I’m the wind and I’m the air,, but Mrs Young found that Daniel had been disappeared. Everyone, even police man looked around, but they couldn’t find anything until one student found his hat on the cliff. He was find on the cave near cliff and…. -Ann-
On Wednesday it was our camp day at Hanmer Springs Forest. We got organised and gathered everyone in room 10 & 7, oh, and our school Riccarton primary. We left at 8:30am, since I was in the car, looking at mountains, bushes and native forest, the forest don't even look like native forest, more like a haunted forest, mountains look like a graveyard and bushes look more like a ghost house. When I looked at them, I was like "What is this place?" And so my friends ignored me. "Well, we're here, home sweet home!" Connor replied. When we were there we saw: the moving and it's not even windy, house banging like BANG! ground shaking, feels like an earthquake. Everybody's freaking out, especially the parents and their kids. We entered the house it was all old and rusty, feels like it's taking me back to the 1980s. The next day we went to the hot pools because it was boring at camp, we did nothing at camp because the activity that we want to do wasn't there, so we decided to go to the hot pool.
At the midnight 12o’clock the students and teachers were arrived they were tired and sleepy, so they straight went to camp. When they all wake at 7o’clock they were very surprised, because instead of old cooker Maria there Sinamon the new cooker. She really cooked very well as Maria, but she was bit strange. When we eating our breakfast teacher suddenly found that a student had been disappeared. He wore blue pants and red t-shirt. When I looked at my soup the piece of blue cloth came up. Suddenly, I heard someone’s scream in downstairs. Everyone rush to downstairs and they found the orange cap and white piece of cloth. The victim must tore the killer’s cloth. Teacher went to the police near camp and we heard the scream again. The one girl had been disappeared and her bag left alone. I couldn’t help myself got scared. After teacher back the police came to camp to find lost children. At dinner Sinamon gave us steaks I looked closed at Sinamon and I found that her cloth had been tear. Every student guarded with police, but I sneaked to kitchen and looked at Sinamon. The most horrible thing was happening in there. She was cooking the lost children. Everything that I ate was the human legs, hands, arms and heads. Suddenly, she turn her head and look at me and she found me scrunching at the corner. She held knife and came to me. I run to my room and protend hat I’m sleeping. The next day I woke up early and went to kitchen to drink water. When I drink water. I realized someone was right behind me… By Emily.S
"Know kids gather around a camp fire I'm going to tell you a scary story",Mr T were to old for scary storys so were going to just go to bed.Later that night Liban had a wierd dream,he saw someone that was hard to see but that person was stabing well Zac.Then Liban woke up as he heard a scream ehhhhhh everyone came outside and went in the forest where the scream came from,when we finally got there Miss young was there and beside her was the died body of Zac.Vehar was to scared to look at the body so he just looked at a tree instead and on that tree it had a note saying who will it be next,he was so scared that he wet his pants.The next day we went tree climbing,I saw Caleb walking into the bush and a while later he came out,could it have been Caleb who was the killer he has not acting like himself and he is always missing at times.Or could it be Miss Young what was she doing in the forest when she found Zac's body this is very hard.Later that night I had another dream about the mysterious shadow it was draging a body and going into the forest,then I woke up and looked at calebs bed he wasn't there so I went to serch for him and while I was getting out of bed Nick and Vehar got out as well,they wanted to came so we all went together.I went the way the shadow did in the dream the place looked familier,we found a blood trail and followed it we finally found a body it was Calebs who was this murderer then it hit me the muderer was...
“Good night” The lights went out 9 o'clock at night and it was still so bright out side.I stared out the window gazing as Nuusila slowly walked to the girls toilets.I lied back resting,my legs ached from all the activities we had done that day... Everyone was up,I couldn't believe it just a couple of minutes ago I was sitting outside my window taking a last glimpse of the beautiful scenery and now here I was ripping everything that got in my way.The questions they keep running through my head,why?who?how? “Nuusila!”Mrs Young screamed out all terrified,I wouldn't blame her,how would she ever tell Nuusila’s parents that she was missing.We walked,the whole class,a cold chill ran down my spine,as if sending bad news.The bushes kept crackling,moving,making me wonder what was hiding amongst them, but I dare not look for it could be anything.Trees swayed in the wind,making shadows all over the forest floor ready to grab us at any minute with it’s long branches,I quickly stopped thinking.I couldn't really tell weather it was me or there really were human shaped shadows passing from tree to tree,or well, they weren't really human shaped maybe a human which had been torn apart.It was so quite that the leaves crunching under our feet seemed to send echoes through the forest making me want to turn and run. “I don't see why we had to get up in the middle of the night to search for someone,I'm pretty sure Nuusila is in bed sleeping right know and we don't even know it” some of the kids muttered,I could hardly tell who they were in the dark. “OK, its all right, everything will be fine we just need to stay together and look out for each other” Mrs Young advised, her voice was so shaky, I could tell that she was terrified, I could barley understand what she was saying. “Yeah,but I guess that didn't work with Nuusila” Frances mumbled,she had arms crossed and was starring at Mrs Young as if to say “its all your fault”, but I guess losing a friend is really tough, Kris couldn't even listen,she just turned around ready to burst into tears. Mrs Young is usually really strict, but didn't say anything. “OK lets go” A loud scream rang my ear drums, it was as if someone was crying for help,I quickly turned around, terrified. “What was that!” “ Wait where is Liban Sohillah
sing the next day he was dead on the bed room floor Jacks mum gat called in that day she was crying and more people where crying. Butt we got on to the next thing it was swimming Vehar he died some one drowned him. So after that death we went to school and people went home on Monday 20 people turned up but the next day all off the class saddle passed away and only Jamin turned up to school so then she looked in other class but the school was empty then Jamin was like NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They died dam no more school I want to learn I might be the only alive oh I’m going to kill my self because there is no point to be alive for long it will be scary by my self I here a voice saying HELP! HELP! And I reply where you I here the voice I’m under the binding I can’t move I’m under binding 69 …………… get me out ……the next day
My memoires at camp My memoires at camp are when we went go karting And Caleb and I raced around the track that was fun. But the best thing was air rifling was awesome. The best thing on the tramp was watching Paris doing back flips
one beautiful Wednesday , the sun was shining as a normal Christchurch morning and on that morning it was the day of Kim's school camp , she woke up bright and early and was ready and packed for her trip to Hanmer springs. The morning she got to school everyone was all ready like she was all her friends were very exited like the rest of the class , it hit 9:00am and it was time for everyone to hope into there cars , Kim had hoped into her favorite teachers car miss palms and two other students. Once they had arrived it was just about 11:30am so as everyone had jumped out of their cars they were in to get some fresh air and to have there morning tea. Kim wasn't very hungry as the rest of the class was because her and her family had a big breakfast for there good byes to her. So she had sat next to the new teacher named Mr D he seemed very strange but Kim didn't want to leave clueless so she HAD to ask questions... Well she had asked him one million questions she had to go back into the car and they all had to go to where they were staying , she didn't no anything about this camp because this was her very first camp. Once they got there and all students were unpacked and everything they started on the activity's set for them. The day had gone so fast and everyone had tuns of fun that it was time for bed. That night it was about 10:00pm in the night and Kim had to go to the toilet so she got up and went but as soon as she open the door there was Mr D standing there as if her was going to come in anyways. Mr D was ...
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ReplyDeleteIt was starting to get dark and Mr Irving was chasing down his victims it started with the teachers and parents then taking the children one by one no one knew. Then chonny had to go to the toilet and saw Mrs. Young and conner’s dad eating Ethan and enjoying it a lot. Then chonny ran away without a sound and ran to his bunk room and told everyone. After chonny told everyone, they locked their bunkroom doors and barricaded the doors with the beds and keeped two for sleeping. They had an idea that they should destroy the zombies and live on without that scary witnessing. It was the last day of camp but not the last day of survival so they got weapons and split up into teams making traps till late dawn at 8 till 9 pm then finishing at 4 to 6 am it was war! The teams were a mix of room 10 and 7 together with also Belac, Chonny, Vilar and Levi. The war went on four ages then it finished on the 29th of June 2018. They thought they killed them all but they didn’t know that Mr. Irving was the controller and the war was still on and no one knew.
Don’t trust anybody you don’t know what or who they might be.
At precisely 8:48 am on a stormy Wednesday morning, Room 10 And Room 7 departed for what was thought to be a wonderful Hanmer springs camp but that all changed, as they arrived at the camp a eeriness filled the air and the storm let off two humungous bolts of fork lightning, the classes filled the bunkrooms and stayed inside all day to wait out the storm. That night every bunk room shook waking all the students occupying them, the reason behind the shaken bunkrooms was unknown and many reports came pouring in to the adults on the camp. The next day came and the sun was shining and all occupants on the camp applied their sunscreen, once again the camp filled with horror as the other schools in Hanmer springs angrily growled and groaned with the greenest of faces and plunged to the ground, they were all sick from the horrible food they were served the night before RPS was the only school still on their feet and hoping for a better day. As the day widened nobody was sure what they would experience on the activities but they hoped for it to be good. The first activity was ‘Team initiative challenges’ A new girl called Karen was attending this camp with Riccarton Primary and at the first activity at 3:30(ish) Karen got the shock of her life in the clouds they read ‘you better watch out someone is out to get you’
ReplyDeleteShe asked Micah and Kris if they saw it but they said they could only see a little bunny and that’s it. At the second activity (tree climbing) Karen found she was warned again a small carving in the top of the old tree it read ‘you should’ve listened now it’s a riot after you –dead or alive … Karen!’ she was really scared now and went running to her older sister Sarah “help , help someone is after me” she creamed with terror,her sister thought she was nuts but on the last night at the x-factor performance she found that outside were flashing lights coming from the tree in the woods and then a huge army of disfigured man men came limping from the depths of the forest,flames emerged and she woke up from her tattered bed, shaking,sweating,heart racing,she was alone and the bunkroom shook harder than the last time…
From that night on no-one knew what actually happened to Karen,she never returned home….
Can you come up with a ending to my story?
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Come on team its Wednesday what have you been doing? Lets really hope this week they have written them just not posted.
P.S thanks Mrs Young for letting me share my stories on the blog! Its fun
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One dark misty Wednesday night , Riccarton Primary School was at Hanmer Springs Forestry Camp, they shared the camp with Branston Intermediate. One little boy sleep walked from Branston intermediate. But he wasn't any ordinary sleep walker , he slept walked with knives. That night he stabbed a boy from Riccarton Primary , the boys name was Nishiel. The people in his bunk room was Klayton , Zac and Asher. Klayton cried like a little girl , Zac pissed hid pants and Asher died because he was so scared.
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That Thursday night some one decided to go for a mid-night swim (Christian.) The little boy was out again , Christian died and it wasn't only him he stabbed all the teachers and majority of the kids there were a few kids from Branston and the kids left from Riccarton were Vehar , Kris , Keziah , Caleb and Brianna. They were all scared! Didn't know what to do? All of them came together , they worked all day preparing for that night making plans and weapons. The night came they were all scared to death! Will they make it!? Who knows?
Friday Night! The last night!
They were prepared , weapons and all. Vehar was Praying , he said "Oh lord please help us in this situation lord, we need as much help as we can get lord then Keziah interrupted and said grow up and be a man! He stopped and said amen! then tears started to dribble down the side of his face . He wiped them and grew stronger. The weird thing was it was 5 against 1 and the five were scared....They saved the day and lived at Hanmer springs camp because they had no way of getting home.
The plan
-break all the knives
-call Tommys Mother (the killer)
-Have something to eat
-Then sleep.
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Good to see the good work girls and Zac :) keep them coming in! make us proud!
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“Where are we Mason? Look what happens when we trust you with the map, biggest mistake of my life,” grunted Tanith.
“Just be thankful for what we have, ok? We should consider ourselves lucky that we chose to travel with our backpacks.” retorted Mason who slyly dodged the blame. Tanith strode off moaning to herself while gathering useful looking bits of firewood to feed the hungry fire. Cosmos sat and said nothing. The trio were lost deep in the woods while on their way to a supposedly popular campsite. Unfortunately, it didn’t turn out as they had planned.
1 HOUR LATER…
“What was that? I swear I saw some kind of black animal… a black dog.” whispered Mason.
“Umm... don’t black dogs signify death? Like someone you know is going to die…?” stuttered Tanith, her eyes wide with fear. Then, before Mason could react a rustling noise abruptly stirred within the bushes. Mason put a finger to his mouth and extinguished the bright flames while hastily grabbing his torch out of his backpack. He signalled for his two friends to gather alongside him, “Hello? Who’s there? Come out now.” He croaked ignoring the break in his voice. Then suddenly a fearsome creature with indescribable features emerged from the bushes. Horns sprouted out of its elbows and its fur was pitch black, excluding the gray splotch on its chest. It was like a mutation of an ordinary wolf… in simple words it was a monster. Its actions were ruthless; it was wildly swinging its claws about, careless of what would be the result. “MASON!” Tanith screamed and Cosmos showed a rare swirl of emotion on his face. Mason clutched his chest as blood came squirting out, his face in a petrified state. The world seemed to travel in slow motion as he collapsed to the ground. The beast, obviously satisfied with its kill, grabbed Mason and started to eat him alive. It was truly a gruesome sight; something even Cosmos couldn’t bear. He gritted his teeth and grabbed Tanith who was now screaming with tears streaming down her face; Cosmos knew that if they waited the beast would take them next, so he ran. Ignoring the shouts and screams from Tanith he pulled her on until they came to a clearing. He could see a road! “Mason, Mason,” sobbed Tanith as she pulled away from his hold, she fell to her knees and wept. Cosmos was in shock too, the experience was so vivid in his head and it kept replaying in his mind. He wanted to scream and shout and cry, but he contained it; listening to his heart beat wildly in his chest. Slowly, he opened his backpack and took some matches out. “Wha- what are you doing?” asked Tanith who’s sleeves were soaked with tears. Ignoring her, Cosmos carried on. He lit several matches and dropped them each in front of three trees that were standing before them. Rapidly, the flames spread engulfing everything in their path. Hands clenched, Cosmos turned around and walked. Walked without a second glance at the horrid place which bred the ruthless beast.
Jamin, 536 words sorry couldn’t help it D;
It was the 23 of Novemeber 8:00am and it was the day of riccarton Primary school's year 7&8 camp day.Their camp was heild at Hanmer Springs, the place where people say "thats where the gosht haunts",thats the place where kids disapper". But we Riccarton kids think that they are just trying to put us off!but it did for some!But it doesn't matter now, at least im going. We were all at school putting our lagageu onto the trailer. As we were done we all got into the cars and away to Hanmer Springs we go. As we were getting closer and closer to Hanmer Springs i could scenece some sort of darkness and eerily noises. But when we got down the road Mrs young stops the car. We asked her "why did you stop?" She said "because there is someone standing in the middle of the road". As we looked closely we couldnt see it but we could fell someone eagerly breathing down our backs. We turned around to see who or what it is and we see a man with blood dripping down his body! we scream and then he disappered. We kept driving our way to Hanmer Springs. When we got there everyone hoped out of the the car frightened and told all their friends what happened. But one kid stayed in the car it was Christan Adams. He was do frightened he went all quiet and didn't tell anyone. As the first night had come and it was 12:00pm Christab Adams disobyed the rules no one new what was wrong with him. But that night he went swimming in the hot pools.The next day Christan was gone and he disappered but then Kris saw bloody footprints so she followed it and found a lot of blood in the hot pool with a smiley face and it said" YOUR NEXT". So Kris screamed and every one made there way towards her but they couldn't see what she saw, it disappered. She lookedback and they were telling the truth. But that hole day they went looking for Christan. But no one new where he was. Night 2 Kris was too sceared to go to sleep so she didn't. She went to find out more about what happened to Christan Adams. She sneaked into the video room and wathced all the videos and lucky lats was the one whereChristan goes missing.She watched it and she saw how the bloody footprints got there. But as Kris kept looking into it, it turns out that the blood isn't realy Christans its "JOPE'S". Every night at 12:00pm something weired would happen to him. He would get up and go some where. But one night Klayton got up at 12:00pm and went to the toilet and the next morning jope pretended to find him dead in the toilet. But it all started to add up Jope was the killer, it all made scenece to kris someone would disapper at12:00pm and thats when Jope would always get up and act all different around people. Everyone found out about it and they called the police. The police took Jope away but just befor they took him he looked at Kris and said" YOU NEXT"............
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ReplyDeleteIt was the first night of camp and it was going great we had so much fun so it was around midnight and Sohillah, Jamin, Nofoa and I were lying in our bunkroom beds asleep until suddenly we were awakened by rustling and a girly shriek of terror. “what was that” I asked in distress . Jamin replied with “bushes and wind and some girl probably got a nightmare dummy”. So we went to sleep. In the morning everyone was stressing out apparently Vehar had gone missing it was his girly scream we had heard last night . there was a search party looking for him it was free time Zac, Jamin, Helena, Brianna, Michael, Jackson, Sohillah, Liban, Nofoa and I were playing tag when suddenly Zac stopped running under a tree we all went up to him to see what was wrong he said “look up” we looked I shirked in terror when I saw Vehar the teacher came running they took him to hospital the doctors said he was dead. Someone came to check out his body they said his brain was sucked dry but noone knew how …..
-Keziah
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Camp Horror Story!!!
ReplyDeleteOMG CAMP!!! , can’t wait, and the camp is tomorrow I’m so excited. Next day all of my class arrived at Kokire. All of my class explored around Kokire . When we came back my parents and my best friends dad. I was so happy that my parents came. But Alice wasn’t that happy because she didn’t like her dad after her mum died. Alice’s dad has mental problems and the dad hates Alice that was Alices step dad they never get along. The next night everyone was asleep then I heard someone opening the door so I went outside and check who It was and I saw Alice sleep walking then I saw her walking towards where the mountain bikes were, I called her name out loud but she didn’t hear me. She never have sleep walk when she goes to camp. I called her name again but she didn’t hear me , she just ride her bike up on the mountain so I decided to follow her up to the mountain .That night their was a full moon. Up on the mountain Alice stopped riding the bike, I tried to wake her up but she didn’t wake up. So I decide to carry her back to the camp ground then not long ago their was a strange noise came out of nowhere, I was so scared because it was only me and Alice was still asleep then one minute later a wolf jumped out of nowhere and started killing Alice, I cried and ran all the way to the camp ground and started to wake up my parents they said what happen so I said Alice died a wolf killed her .After I told my parents I went and told Alices dad but he wasn’t their. A few days later all of my class my parents and Alices dad came to Alices frenula my tears were going down so hard. But I didn’t know who actually killed Alice but I’m searching for clues for her deaf.
By Nofoa
t Hanmer forestry camp a teacher goes in to the woods and comes out as frieza.
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AAAAHHHHHHH!!!! “boys boys, come help us” yelled out the girls.
<3 hours earlier>
“All boys and girls are having fun on the trees why don’t we go pig hunting” said Mrs Y to Leov and Mr T. so they went hunting they got pigs human and animal types plus the human pig weapons and tools. It got to bed time and Frieza got hungry , so she went into her room but when 0930 came along well at the start is what happens.
But then night 2 comes around and she goes for the boys.
Thank the lord I was in with Goku and Gohan.
Well the boys were able to put up a fight but when we awoke to the racket it was too late. We had failed to save the girls and the boys. Night 3 was quiet but too quiet for my liking. Night 4 rolls over and here I am with the z sword waiting to kill frieza. She came to me and started to fight and I put up a fight but frieza had the upper hand of ki blasts so I had to strike the chest then 1 blow to the neck and severed her neck. So night 5 was quiet for my crew and the staff but the moon makes gohan transform to an ape. So me and goku destroy it with goku having kamehameha and me and an rpg with extra capabilities.
The moon goes bang!!!!!BBBBLLLLAAAAMMMBOOOOOOOOOMMMM!!!!!!!
But he doesn’t change back for another five minutes. That’s all right Mrs Y came back to life as frieza so we just leave her to die.
Well life goes on Liban, Sohillah, Ethan, Jamin, Micah, Klayton, kris and Zac all had parents come in and call authorities but get nowhere. So this story ends like all others everyone dies in 50 years it’s alright nothing big comes around.
christian and also i went up to about 350 words
He smiled as he sipped at his coffee. It had been an excellent hike. He was glad his friend had recommended coming to the Hanging Hills in Connecticut; not the first place that had come to his mind when considering a vacation. But it was beautiful here. When his friend arrived tomorrow they would tackle some of the more challenging terrain.
ReplyDelete“Did you have a nice hike?” asked the innkeeper as she refilled his cup.
“Yes indeed. I had some unexpected company,” he said with a smile.
“Really? I thought you were the only one crazy enough to go hiking in the rain,” she teased.
“It was a little black dog,” he said. “Cute fellow. Followed me all the way up the mountain and down again.”
He looked up from his coffee to see the innkeeper’s face had gone pale.
“A black dog?” she asked. “That’s not good.”
“Why not?”
“We have a saying around here,” she replied. “’And if a man shall meet the Black Dog once, it shall be for joy; and if twice, it shall be for sorrow; and the third time, he shall die.’” He laughed. “That’s just superstition.”
“That’s what Mr. Pynchon said. He saw the black dog twice. The second time he saw the dog, the friend he was climbing with fell to his death. And later, Mr. Pynchon decided to climb the same mountain, and he died too. Everyone here believes he saw the dog just before he fell.”
“Nonsense. It was just a cute stray,” he said uneasily. She shrugged and took the coffee pot over to her other customers.
His friend arrived the next morning and they both laughed about the story of the black dog. They set out on their climb. About halfway up the mountain, he looked up and saw the black dog.
“There’s the dog,” he called to his friend.
And then his foot slipped and he plunged down the side of the hill, desperately grabbing at saplings and rocks, trying to halt his descent. It seemed to take forever for him to stop sliding. There was a stabbing pain in his leg. When he looked at it, his head swimming, it was bent at an odd angle. They had to send in a mountain rescue team to get him down. At the hospital, they told him his leg was broken in two places and he was very lucky it wasn’t worse.
“You know, that was a very strange fall,” said his friend uneasily. “You don’t really think it had anything to do with that black dog?”
He looked down at the cast that extended all the way up to his hip.
“I don’t know. But I don’t really want to find out. Next time, let’s go to Colorado.”
His friend agreed.
"Amy"Amy" where are you? Please come out! The first day of camp and my sister is missing , where could she have gone? Everyone had rest to bed for the early wake up tomorrow. But it was creepy that I had been to the bathroom and came back and she has disappeared. At first I had thought this was a joke but I thought about it , Amy hates the dark. I held my torch as tight as I could flashing it to everything that moves. I know i may be crazy but i had felt something softly pull me back , or it was just the wind. But a small voice came into my head i turned around to see if anyone was there ... No sign of anyone , I hear a big loud scream i run and follow it , its leading me to the biggest forest at this camp. It was about 10:00pm and everyone was fast asleep.
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I was still on the search for Amy , as i walked I had pictures popping in my head , as i started to get dizzier and dizzier every time a picture comes and goes as fast as it can. All i remember is i fall to the ground I see a clear picture of some one running out behind the trees. I no it looks like the new teacher Mr Dean. He stood there as I past out slowly my whole mind was blank nothing to be seen ...
2 hours later...
My eyes slowly start to open as i can see nothing but Mr D standing there watching me as I wake up. I fully open my eyes and I can see Amy , she looks sore and she had cuts on her face I take one more look around then geez at Mr D , he asks me if um feeling OK ? I reply and tell him to let us go. He doesn't look like we had a chance on getting away from him. Amy is giving me hand signals like she was scared and he was gonna kill us. I use all my strength to stand up and sit back down next to Amy. Mr D walk out and slams the door in anger. Amy and I slowly help each other up and look around , i walk up to the glass window , i see my refection and my black everything , every bit of it was black , I look at my self and stare i also to have cuts on my face and feel very sore. Every part of my body had been hurt. Amy and I both start feeling sick again , my head felt like it was going to explode. We see each other both fall to the ground...
(RING RING RING)...
My alarm had gone off , it was all a dream few! I walk into Amy's room she wasn't there I look every where in the house , i even try calling her phone. All her bags where still here so she couldn't have gone and left to camp already. Someone knocks on the door I run down stairs and open the door , It was Mr D...
Room 10 & 7 were all hyped up and excited to go to Hanmer Springs Camp all together for the year 8s last year. All they could think about was the activities and groups for the bunk rooms. Room 10 was the smart and strong class and was always on top but room 7 was not. Room10 first left to camp but a boy from room 10 was a traitor no won knows but he will disobey and betray them.
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As bunk rooms were set people wondered why they were placed in these rooms not because the disliked them just that they never thought about it and it surprised them.
Kris, Jamin and Brianna settled in, by 10pm they were all asleep. But they all woke up at the same time of 2am and heard a noise they had a look outside it was a boy, but it was to dark to see him he was talking to some other boys (room 7 boys) the girls sneaked out and listened they were talking about killing room 10 pupils because they were sick of room 10 out shining them. The girls ran off and told the others they all had a plan and waited for anything to happen, but they all fell asleep at 4am.
Day 2
All of the girls in room 10 woke up at 8am in a room with no doors or windows but one light at the top of the ceiling. They were all confused but scared and wondered why are they in here. But then they had a look around Jamin was gone, nowhere to be seen. The soon realized she had been taken away somewhere. Nuusila found a note on the wall, it said: Bad always get revenge on the good, they were all scared but continued on reading: Jamin has gone to heaven and someone with brown frizz hair but can be straitened. They all looked at Franky and said your next. She started to scream and cry softly but it wasn’t helping. They all new that the next night they had to protect her. But that night the loved friend was gone.
Day 3
Kris, Brianna, Nuusila, Nofoa and Keziah waited but then Nofoa found something it was a crack in the wall it was fake she could open it like a door. They all ran out and all of a sudden they see room 7 and a boy but hes turned around they can’t see him, they set up a trap to kill us because they knew we got out. So room 10 made a plan.
What happened was room 7 all got gassed in the kitchen and died and room 10 walked away like they knew nothing but they never found Jamin or Franky. Also the boys came out alive and one boy from room 10 was dead. ( Zach )
(The traitor was Ethan &…………Christian)
Brianna 471
Camp horror story
ReplyDelete“Good night”, yarned Kate
I fell asleep straight away as the lights switched of in the noiseless room. Outside I could hear owl’s morning and wind blowing through opened cracks, as it whistles through the lonely night at, Hamner Springs camp. I dreamt of some odd dream that came with sorrow and sadness. So I will carry on with my dream, I was walking along a gravel path through the depths of the forest. Dark lonely and scary, I carried on I walked slowly finding my way back to the camp site. I feel a shiver down my back. Suddenly I heard a noise, I was terrified so I ran straight ahead of me, I felt dizzy, my vision stared to blur and I fainted.
3 hours later:
I woke up adjusting my eyes to where I was, I was Surrounded by shelves and shelves of poisons, my eye caught one that said “ KILLING POISON.” I just realized that I was trapped in a iron, steel cage. As I fail to escape a big lady came stomping in and steered at me. She had sharp pointy vampire teeth with fresh meat sticking at the tip of her tooth, a smell coming from the kitchen wanted me to throw up, it smelt like dead cats blood. I steered back at the lady she wore a apron covered in blood, her was grey and old, her face was ugly and terrible and disturbing. The woman opened the cage where I was, before I knew it I was screaming but that didn’t last long. I got eaten by the woman. Someone poured water on me I screamed because I thought it was blood , But it was just my friend Kate pouring water on me to wake me up. The End
Helena 303 words
"Jamie, Jane this is cabin #6," said Lisa (our camp counsellor).
ReplyDeleteSix my unlucky number. Jane and I were at our first sleep over camp. This was not a good way to start I thought, as Lisa opened the door.
"This is the main floor. It has the kitchen and T.V.," she said as we stepped inside.
I looked across the room. In a far corner there was a big ladder. I walked over to it and climbed up. I heard a distant voice behind me say, "This is the loft where the older girls sleep." The younger kids sleep in the main house and the counsellors sleep in their own cabins.
The loft consisted of four hay stuffed mattresses and two candles. In one corner of the room there was a huge window.
"I will leave you girls to get settled. When you are finished meet me in the dining room."
When Lisa disappeared I flopped down on the nearest bed which happened to be the one next to the window. Jane spread her sleeping bag on the bed next to me. A few minutes later two girls came into the loft. One's name was Maggie. She had blond hair and green eyes. The other was Meghan. She had brown hair and blue eyes. She was a little plump.
I lay on my bed in the dark. Everyone was asleep. Something under my bed was keeping me up. Finally I decided to have a look. Maybe a poor mouse had gotten stuck. When I lifted the bed there was a big trap door planted beneath. I looked for a way to open it. There was only a little metal ring. It took all my strength to pull it up. It was not a passage instead it was a little storage place.
I reached in to see if there was anything left. I grasped a piece of paper and drew it out. The paper turned out to be an envelope. I opened it. Inside there was a piece of paper. The paper was taped together and when I opened it a locket fell to the floor. I picked it up and examined it. The locket was on a very pretty gold chain. It must have been left by another girl I thought as I opened the note. I stopped dead. In someone's blood a person had printed, "Free Me ! This Means You Jamie Dunwood!"
I gasped and looked down at the locket. When I opened it inside was a picture of a pretty dark haired girl. I had no idea who she was. In fact I had never seen her in my life.
Suddenly the door slammed shut. It was Lisa. Quickly I shoved my bed over the hole and jumped in. I waited. No one came. I looked out the window. Someone dressed in white was streaking towards the beach. One of the little kids had been spying on me. I raced down the ladder and out the door. I ran after the white figure and caught up to it right by the water. When it turned around I saw to my horror that it was the same girl on the locket except she was white and I could see through her. I screamed loudly and Jane came running.
"What's wrong Jamie?"
"The, the, it's a ghost! It was here!" I turned around and pointed to the place where the ghost had been but it was gone.
"What was there?" Jane asked as we walked back to the cabin!
"Nothing Jane , it was just my imagination," I said. "Let's get inside before Lisa realizes that we are gone!"
By:Micah
it was going to turn out to be a wonderful but it WASN'T.....
ReplyDeleteso room 10 were heading to hamner springs for camp but sopme students noticed some strange things just as they were going there. When they got out of the cars and vans they thought they would be staying in cabins or bunkromms instead the teachers put them in tents and the teachers got the bunkrooms the little witc -um anywayso we had to stay out side which was okay except for the part about the coldness of the place it was like sleeping in the arctic so thats the first day good night ...
Day 2
so it's 7:30 in the morning
the teachers all can in and set off a really loud alarm that could have shaken a house but somehow it didn't well we had breakfast toast with butter on it while the teachers get egg and bacon which annoyed the other fellow students but the activites should be fun. I regreet saying that when we had to climb the tree the teachers gave us no safty harnest or helmet just some rope and for the mini game of rugby we had a head count and ethan was missing but no one cared but what else was missing was one of the teachers but ethan might have got in trouble and was pulled out again anyway the games were fun and we were all tired but for some reasons the teachers split us up and put us in dirrent places of hamner and the scary part was that it was night time we should be in bed but the split us up and place uss every where then they said to go and look for more people through the area at midnight
12:01!!!
ok its just past midnight i am on top of conical hill and am now heading down when i see a fait glow in the area below me and the a howl like not a dog but a wolf howl and thats when i worry but then someone runs up to me and i see it's it's liban and then it doesn't matter as he spots me and askes if I've seen anyone else but of cours nope havn't so me and liban walked down conical hill then suddenlywe spot zac by the tree near the bottom and he is freaking out but when he see's us he walks over as he reached us i hear the ticking of grears moving and the i accidently grab zac and pull him in frount of the tree beside me and vii vii vii vii and zac falls into the ground and i realised i killed him sweat i thought then i remembered it was zac sweat anyway i think the teachers are trying to kill us.
Day 3
me and liban had made through the night but i think we wer e the only survivers then i realise liben hadn't talked since i found him and just as i turned around shing ow that hurt uhhh liban how could you uhhhh...
by michael
On the 1 of December everybody was very excited because they were going to the best horror camp for boys. The camp was located on the east coast of England. All the boys thought it was all a joke but they don’t know is that there used to be an old school there and that the old principle was murdered.
ReplyDeleteWhen we arrived at the camp site it started pouring down with rain. While the kids were just settling they all saw that Jimmy was missing and then they all heard a massive as bang then they all started getting scared so then Nick went and checked the toilets and nick saw that Jimmy was dead with a piece of chocolate cake in his mouth. After lunch every body had free time. At the camp they had everything they had a massive as playground, go carts, a big forest for orientation and a lot of other things as well. After free time it was time for dinner. At dinner all the boys were very scared. They were all thinking about who killed Jimmy. Everybody was being interviewed by the police. During the night time Zac went missing, they were all really scared so they all wanted to go home so that was the plan. When they arrived back at school they were in a hurry to get home. On Monday only nick turned up to school the rest had sadly passed away then suddenly…..
23rd of November Riccarton Primary School’s year8 and year7 students are exciting about going to camp.
ReplyDelete8 o clock finally we start to pack the bag and start to get on the bus.. and than teachers told them to sit and count the number of student.
“OK” Mrs. Young said, now we can go now!!
2hour later finally we arrive at hammer spring and we check our friends or our bags, but there have one problem where is Ethan? We was really worry that he is gone we call to other teachers or one of the bus that didn’t arrived yet.
Finally we found Ethan and he was at other bus..
But we are all tired and also we are hungry.. so we pack our bag to our room fast and eat our lunch, it was little bit late but it was best lunch time that I never have before.
My room was L3 and my room mates was 4 girls,, second day of camp we done Mt. biking, tree climbing and hot pool swimming first we done Mt biking and it was so~~ great and it feels like I’m the wind and I’m the air,, but Mrs Young found that Daniel had been disappeared. Everyone, even police man looked around, but they couldn’t find anything until one student found his hat on the cliff. He was find on the cave near cliff and….
-Ann-
On Wednesday it was our camp day at Hanmer Springs Forest. We got organised and gathered everyone in room 10 & 7, oh, and our school Riccarton primary. We left at 8:30am, since I was in the car, looking at mountains, bushes and native forest, the forest don't even look like native forest, more like a haunted forest, mountains look like a graveyard and bushes look more like a ghost house. When I looked at them, I was like "What is this place?" And so my friends ignored me. "Well, we're here, home sweet home!" Connor replied. When we were there we saw: the moving and it's not even windy, house banging like BANG! ground shaking, feels like an earthquake. Everybody's freaking out, especially the parents and their kids. We entered the house it was all old and rusty, feels like it's taking me back to the 1980s. The next day we went to the hot pools because it was boring at camp, we did nothing at camp because the activity that we want to do wasn't there, so we decided to go to the hot pool.
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At the midnight 12o’clock the students and teachers were arrived they were tired and sleepy, so they straight went to camp. When they all wake at 7o’clock they were very surprised, because instead of old cooker Maria there Sinamon the new cooker. She really cooked very well as Maria, but she was bit strange. When we eating our breakfast teacher suddenly found that a student had been disappeared. He wore blue pants and red t-shirt. When I looked at my soup the piece of blue cloth came up. Suddenly, I heard someone’s scream in downstairs. Everyone rush to downstairs and they found the orange cap and white piece of cloth. The victim must tore the killer’s cloth. Teacher went to the police near camp and we heard the scream again. The one girl had been disappeared and her bag left alone. I couldn’t help myself got scared. After teacher back the police came to camp to find lost children. At dinner Sinamon gave us steaks I looked closed at Sinamon and I found that her cloth had been tear. Every student guarded with police, but I sneaked to kitchen and looked at Sinamon. The most horrible thing was happening in there. She was cooking the lost children. Everything that I ate was the human legs, hands, arms and heads. Suddenly, she turn her head and look at me and she found me scrunching at the corner. She held knife and came to me. I run to my room and protend hat I’m sleeping. The next day I woke up early and went to kitchen to drink water. When I drink water. I realized someone was right behind me…
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"Know kids gather around a camp fire I'm going to tell you a scary story",Mr T were to old for scary storys so were going to just go to bed.Later that night Liban had a wierd dream,he saw someone that was hard to see but that person was stabing well Zac.Then Liban woke up as he heard a scream ehhhhhh everyone came outside and went in the forest where the scream came from,when we finally got there Miss young was there and beside her was the died body of Zac.Vehar was to scared to look at the body so he just looked at a tree instead and on that tree it had a note saying who will it be next,he was so scared that he wet his pants.The next day we went tree climbing,I saw Caleb walking into the bush and a while later he came out,could it have been Caleb who was the killer he has not acting like himself and he is always missing at times.Or could it be Miss Young what was she doing in the forest when she found Zac's body this is very hard.Later that night I had another dream about the mysterious shadow it was draging a body and going into the forest,then I woke up and looked at calebs bed he wasn't there so I went to serch for him and while I was getting out of bed Nick and Vehar got out as well,they wanted to came so we all went together.I went the way the shadow did in the dream the place looked familier,we found a blood trail and followed it we finally found a body it was Calebs who was this murderer then it hit me the muderer was...
ReplyDeleteBy Liban
“Good night”
ReplyDeleteThe lights went out 9 o'clock at night and it was still so bright out side.I stared out the window gazing as Nuusila slowly walked to the girls toilets.I lied back resting,my legs ached from all the activities we had done that day...
Everyone was up,I couldn't believe it just a couple of minutes ago I was sitting outside my window taking a last glimpse of the beautiful scenery and now here I was ripping everything that got in my way.The questions they keep running through my head,why?who?how?
“Nuusila!”Mrs Young screamed out all terrified,I wouldn't blame her,how would she ever tell Nuusila’s parents that she was missing.We walked,the whole class,a cold chill ran down my spine,as if sending bad news.The bushes kept crackling,moving,making me wonder what was hiding amongst them, but I dare not look for it could be anything.Trees swayed in the wind,making shadows all over the forest floor ready to grab us at any minute with it’s long branches,I quickly stopped thinking.I couldn't really tell weather it was me or there really were human shaped shadows passing from tree to tree,or well, they weren't really human shaped maybe a human which had been torn apart.It was so quite that the leaves crunching under our feet seemed to send echoes through the forest making me want to turn and run.
“I don't see why we had to get up in the middle of the night to search for someone,I'm pretty sure Nuusila is in bed sleeping right know and we don't even know it” some of the kids muttered,I could hardly tell who they were in the dark.
“OK, its all right, everything will be fine we just need to stay together and look out for each other” Mrs Young advised, her voice was so shaky, I could tell that she was terrified, I could barley understand what she was saying.
“Yeah,but I guess that didn't work with Nuusila” Frances mumbled,she had arms crossed and was starring at Mrs Young as if to say “its all your fault”, but I guess losing a friend is really tough, Kris couldn't even listen,she just turned around ready to burst into tears. Mrs Young is usually really strict, but didn't say anything.
“OK lets go”
A loud scream rang my ear drums, it was as if someone was crying for help,I quickly turned around, terrified.
“What was that!”
“ Wait where is Liban
Sohillah
sing the next day he was dead on the bed room floor Jacks mum gat called in that day she was crying and more people where crying. Butt we got on to the next thing it was swimming Vehar he died some one drowned him. So after that death we went to school and people went home on Monday 20 people turned up but the next day all off the class saddle passed away and only Jamin turned up to school so then she looked in other class but the school was empty then Jamin was like
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My memoires at camp
ReplyDeleteMy memoires at camp are when we went go karting
And Caleb and I raced around the track that was fun.
But the best thing was air rifling was awesome.
The best thing on the tramp was watching Paris doing back flips