Friday, June 24, 2011

Dazzling Descriptions!


Use the following image to write your own detailed description on one of the characters - remember to include the key characteristics we have covered in class!

28 comments:

  1. the kid is called Herbert . he likes to play with little kids . he hates catty and snarly teens .the kid is 9 years old . Herbert loves to kill little dogs if he is able to go to the pound when he is angry.

    he has blue and grey denim jeans with a brown shirt (woolen shirt). he is a very pale and tan colored kid . his short fluffy hair is black with blonde streaks an the unseen side.he is a small built kid with a skinny set of legs .plus the set of bulky arms.not to forget his stone blue eyes .

    the background they are in is Antarctica.

    the other figure in the pic is called dolaphount.
    he is a walking hectors green dolphin with blue public sight devises that only get given to this model. he is a real dolphin ...

    or is he ... dun dun dun

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  2. Kid :
    this kid is named Mia (pronounced as my-a) she is a kid who comes from a family which is not rich but is not poor either , she is also the only child. Mia is a generous, adventurous kid who loves exploring she recently found a new world containing a beast, it was a dolpheal (dolf-eel) a cross between a dolphin and a seal, it is a amazing discovery considering she has a passion for animals.

    In this picture it may look like she has really short hair but as a fact it is just tied back in a stubby looking pony tail, the clothes that she is wearing is her lucky jeans and her adventure shirt.at this point in time she is happy because she is talking to her friend (named Anastasia)she also ripped her shirt but she fixed it with her emergency "fix it kit" her friend is slowly dissapearing though and she has to go back to her world and have a Delicious meal but she will miss the sound of the gentle waves lapping as her hair gets whipped in the wind.

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  3. this Dolpheals name is Anastasia (anna for short)has soft, smooth skin which is putting her in danger she came to the FearFee kingdom to get away from her hunters who want her skin to use for rain coats. She recently told her friend Mia how to fix her torn clothes with her "FixitKit" but this huge beasts looks are deceiving inside her big mouth she hides 3 rows of razor sharp teeth, her mysterious black eyes tell all.

    she is slowly disappearing though and soon her whole species will be wiped out, its all up to Mia to save the secies this is why the tall mammal is teaching her to defend the kingdom
    She is Anastasia's last hope can she save the kingdom or will something else hidden in this creature make her love for humans a enemy to her and take over her to get rid of Mia before she spreads the secret what will she choose will this gentle creature become her own enemy?

    because this beast has a secret , a BIG secret!

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  4. Dolpheal continued:

    the new discovery has been called a treasure because of its water resistant skin, but sometimes that is the worst trait but in this case Anastasia's best trait is that shes smart and fearless and of coarse gentle.

    this mammal hides a full head of hair under her swim cap! who new a sea animal could have hair?She also usually wears some old "pass down" clothes to wear to school because she is poor

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  5. The first character is the dolphin swimming in the blue sea.Then he saw a boy,he felt sad the dolphin was talking to him.The dolphin was a lovable and friendly friend to him.The dolphins friend is John he felt so lonely and scared because he lost his family.So the dolphin hugged John because he felt sorry for John.The dolphin was caring and understanding.
    John has an awesome t-shirt and cool skinny jeans.John was amaze because he had a friend to talk to so he would t be scared and alone again.They became best friends.John liked hugging the dolphin they always meet afterschool at the sea where the dolphin was.The dolphin knew how to talk John was surprised but they were still best friends.

    BY Nofoa

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  6. Wilburt

    This extraordinary marine mammal has distinct features outlining his body; his tail fin is that of a rubbery material spreading a fresh sea aroma everywhere he ventures. Intense eyes, full of sorrow, tell the story of a gloomy past and fix an icy gaze on anyone who dares approach him. He is of heavy build and a natural type of substance is found in his blood which enables him to live to an extremely ripe old age. The colour of his magnificent body form is a splendid type of exotic gray, never before seen on a creature his size. Watching him swim through the ocean is like gazing at a graceful and elegant ballerina, only his method is much more effortless and entertaining.

    The willpower and wisdom of this creature easily overpowers the greed for one’s own survival. An intellectually advanced mammal, some call him. No one can match his obedience or patience, nor his calmness. Even in the most troubling situations this mammal can weigh out his options and make a quick and unpredictable decision. He is independent, noble, and considerate and has learned to put others before himself. Although, his species are a sensitive type so his personality is quite gentle; any hostile behaviour may trigger a suspicious look but this creature’s last line of defence is retaliation, so be extra careful around him. BUT, Global warming and greenhouse emissions are endangering these rare species and he is encouraging YOU to help make a difference. Go green.
    Jamin ;D

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  7. Dolphin:

    Her name is Daphine the unliked dolphin, she is seven years old and is a bottlenose dolphin.The colour of her eyes is the colour of a pantha. She has six feet and two fins for her hands. Daphine has long hot pink colour hair. She is one hundred and four center meters tall and thirty six center meters wide. Her dorsal fin is as sharp as a brand new knife so you woldnt want to mess with her, but she wont hurt you at all she is as gentle as the wind.

    Daphines favourite foods are Plankton and Tuna. Her favourite colours are blue and white, other dolphins of her kind dosent like her they think she is weird because she has six feet so instead of making friends with dolphins she tries to make friends with humans. They just run away. but one day she met a little boy called Tommy and they became best friends.

    The back round: They are walking on the dead sea.

    Feeling:Daphine is sad but slowly warming up on the on the inside because she has someone that understands her and she can talk to.

    Kris :P

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  8. Penguin:

    The animal is a penguin called, Grey. He is joyful and always delighted to see his friend Tina. He likes going on mystery adventures with his best friend Tina. Grey has two big fins to swim with, he has fast running feet, to run on slipery ice. He loves to eat ice-cream, choclate fish, fruit and vegetables. He has super powers that can grant anyone a wish. The place he lives in is a icy white tower, that sparkles like glitter.

    Kid: Tina

    Tina is cheerful, loving and enthusiastic. She loves wearing colour changing shoes. She likes wearing her special jeans that her best friend Grey gave her. She wears a black and purple stripy top. Her hair is as dark as the night. Imagine having powers. Well Tina has the power of fire that is hotter than the flaming sun.

    =] By Helena

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  9. Kid:Erica
    Erica is a twelve year old girl who was born on the 13th of august 1998 on a lost boat. Erica's parents,Mill and John died a couple of years after her birth,but Erica didn't mind this because she had family members around her everywhere she went.
    Unlike every other human Erica had extraordinary powers such as being able to breath under water.Erica can also talk to all types of animals that's why she swims all around the world meeting new creatures.In this picture Erica is saying fair well to a friend,Dally the wild dolphin who eats animals twice his size such as baby wales and sharks.Dally lives on the shores of New Zealand and cant swim very far because of the different water temperatures.
    Erica has short black hair which never grew long.She wears icy blue shorts,a dark brown top which was woven by an African gorilla as a gift and a pair of dark sneakers.Erica is a gentle and active person who cares about the environment.She really enjoys playing sports but unfortunately she has never been to school.

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  10. Jimmy

    A boy who struggles to keep up with his peers, his thin build and wimpy appearance does not grant him a spot in the rugby team; however, his intelligence is a force to be reckoned with. As well as his popularity with a rather dashing look, his bright crimson chubby cheeks, soft rosy lips and pure baby-like skin score a few points with the ladies. But Jimmy’s thumb was amputated due to an accident and a finger had to be the substitute, although this fact restricted him from performing certain actions; it was a successful and feasible, swift operation. His thickly layered eyebrows, as well as his chocolate brown hair protect him from the chill of winter along with a special Grandma knitted wool fleece.

    Photographic memory is only one of this boy’s numerous talents; he has the gift of high intellect and is extremely observant. Jimmy also wants to sustain peace throughout the world; he aims to achieve the impossible. It is a worthwhile goal, seeing he was able to solve a phantom equation putting himself in the record book as the youngest person to ever solve one. He is open-minded and is always yearning for new knowledge- his goal: to be the next Albert Einstein.
    Jamin c:

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  11. Room 10 Wow!!! Amazing descriptive writing everyone!!! Fantastic writing and it is great to see you all doing this from home. Keep it up! Mr Irving

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  12. Brianna

    Joshua is the boy on the right he is a sophisticated, desperate, bright and a loving person, all of the things his parents don’t like in a person. Joshua’s eyes are pale blue but when you look at them, you feel like you just seen the most beautiful thing in your hole life. His clothes were picked out by his parents because they are punk rockers and love heavy metal songs. Joshua has two sisters and four brothers and they are all punk rockers like his parents, except from Joshua because he wants to be a Teacher because, he likes to tell people what to do and he likes to help people when they are lost. Flash and Lisa try to change their son Joshua but, he is not the type of person to pretend they are someone they are not.

    Water is the baby whale on the left. Water got lost in the deep blue sea, and his parents haven’t seen him for two years, since he was born really. He has a scar on the left side of his cheek that is unseen, it was from a huge hook from two big fishermen. He loves shrimp and he love for you to give him shrimp, because to him it means you like him. But don’t upset him because he will get very angry and his spikes will come out and well I won’t say anymore. The history of after Water losses his parents is unknown so don’t approach, only is you dear.........

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  13. Sorry about the mistake on "is" it should be a "if".
    Brianna

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  14. MAXINE
    In this picture you can only see a friendly gray dolpin Dorathy and a kid named Maxine. As you can see Maxine is wearing a thermal swim suit. Maxine has nice soft short black hair that makes everyone want to stare. Her eyes mathch the ligth blue waves that rumbled away behind them.

    DORATHY THE DOLPINE
    Dorathy here loves to swim and also loves having Maxine around. Dorthy the dolpine has very dark dlack eyes with a very very huge body. Dorathy loves to follow Maxine around. She also loves Maxines famous peanut butter sandwich with a glass of water to help wash it down.

    HOW THEY MET...
    Maxine has a very big imagination. She live's right across the big deep blue sea (THE BEACH)and loves to go swimming in the mornings and she is only 11 years old.One morning she imagened that she had a friend with her that loves to swim too.So when she opened her eyes there was a dolpin right beneath her eyes. They became friends and evry day she would go swimming Dorathy the dolpin was there....

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  15. STEVE THE KID
    Steve the kid is a colourful, bright kid with his darkened, blue, dienem jeans and his brown as the ground t shirt, An enormous smile is one way to describe him. his shadow, black hair makes him look slick. Steve is very self-conscious around people, except when he is around his friend Fred the dolphin. by the way did I tell you that Steve can talk to animals

    FRED THE DOLPHIN
    Fred is a prodigious (giant) dolphin with his midnight black eyes he can see from 100 yards away, his grey scales make his entire body rough as a rocks. He is very innoxious (harmless) new species of dolphin, he can breathe in and out of water and walks like Steve. from the behind he has two horns on his back and three flipper-like tails.

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  16. Harry the best dolphin...
    harry.short,chubbie,male,looking for cuddly friends.Harry has big light green colored eyes,Harry's skin colour is light gray also and is very soft and fluffy. Harry has two other brothers named chuck and Flynn chuck is fourteen and Flynn is nine,Harry is only eleven.Harry also has a younger sister named Latoya which is only four years old,Latoya is the youngest in their family.Harry's mothers name is Larissa and has a father named Tim.Harry is a peaceful,open hearted dolphin that loves Huggs =)



    Harry is also the type of person that you can trust,he will always be there for you as a great friend.Harry is not only a peaceful boy but loves to have alot of fun with his family and friends.HARRY WAS BORN TO BE AMAZING!!!.

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  17. Alex the alien has two fins and 7 large bionicle feet so he can walk as fast as a snail or can run as fast as a cheetah.He can transform his height with his magnificent status body that can change to any lenth or width,his bulky black body is made of a maroon dark black leather so you can hug him all you want and it never falls off.Alexs dark black moon eyes look like they have a mind of their own,stareing into cold space and are serching for something very valuable but can not find it.


    Alex is saying goodbye to his friend who has looked after for awhile,while his fast and aerodynamic ship is being fixed.But thats what Rhyn (kid) knows,but Alex is part of a race which destroys bad planets and Alex has been sent to check if earth is a good place or not.But as you can see in this pictuer we are safe or will Alex lie to them and say we are bad and ashoring us our quick and painless deaths.

    by Liban

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  18. Kid:Bridget
    Bridget is 9 years old she has a fluffy short and a black hair and has a light blue eyes she has a light brown skin.Bridget wears a blue jeans and a woolen clothes.
    Life:
    Bridget is a loyal friend she just live with her mum because her dad died by an accident.Bridget goes to school everyday,she is the smarties girl in the class.Bridget's mum wants to leave and transfer into another country.

    Dolphin:Flipper
    Flipper is a big built and has a grey and white skin and flipper also has a big black eyes.
    Life:
    Flipper lives in the deep blue ocean flipper had a family.Flipper have been a really good friend to Bridget and Bridget plays to flipper after school.

    STORY:
    One morning Bridget goes to the beach she saw something under the water she ran and have a look she saw a big dolphin,she was not afraid.Bridget called the dolphin flipper they became friends.The other day,after school Bridget goes to the beach and met flipper after that they go swimming.

    By:Micah

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  19. the child: Peter
    The child is aged 9 years old and has dark,black silky hair. Peter has a big family that consists of his mother Alice, his father Ben, his brothers Samuel, James and Mat. He lives at a sea side beach house he is wearing super flying pants and a super armored top that is impenetrable, unless you attack him with ham and cheese then he will explode with gum balls and scorpions. he likes to eat pies and he likes to drink acid to build up his 12 pack of abs. peter pan likes to do stuff like fly and drop bombs in the water and catch the fish that fly up into the air. Peter also likes to fly into the middle of wars. He has been known for flying into the middle of world war 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 and all the way up to 98 then 99 then 100. HIS parents were good scientists who made every single invention but the bra which was actually made by Mary Jacobs. Peter has solid green eyes and a big, wide mouth. Also his nose is a young Michael Jackson's nose. Peter is a super bad evil homicidal maniac.

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  20. the creature: abadabahabakaba.
    Abadabahabakaba feeds on human flesh and drinks acidy nuclear toxic waist water. He has super human powers like immortality, invisibility and is able to teleport and shape shift. It acts kind and helps kids out. It also eats cats and dogs.It has 10 tentacles a huge copper like beak, smooth, slimy skin and acid spit that melts anything. it spits on people to turn them into fizzy drinks. This creature is a cross between a dolphin, whale, person, alien, eagle, dog, lion,, tiger, giraffe, and me.

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  21. The Environment: some were in the world.
    The place some where in the world is a big beach and there is alot of mixed grouped animals. Its a nice hot place with really delicious fruits and berries. In other words its the best paradise island that any Dapweagatild or girafitalepold could ever think about.

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  22. Delphinus


    Delphinus is a dolphin.

    Delphinus is quite big and has dark black eyes. He is a bluey grey colour. One of his fins are smaller than the other by five cms. he has a tiny black birthmark in the shape of a star. the black eyes show that he is sad or scared, when he is happy or cheerful his eyes are a dep sea blue. Delpinus has one hundred teeth. Delphinus has a big scratch under his left eye. The scratch is in a shape of a lightning bolt.


    His parents left him when he was two. His drem is that one day he wants to find his parents.He is named Delphinus because it is latin for Dolphin.Delphinus has no friends besides a little boy named Tyler. Delphinus gets made fun of for his funny fins and his big birthmark. He is a really nice guy if you get to know him. He loves to help othersand is actually funny and fun to play with. Delphinus is very sensetive and crys alot, tyler always makes him feel beter.

    {Keziah}

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  23. The dolphin is 7 years old and his name is Glen.He has black eyes and is a loveable guy.He is very playful too.He meets up with his friend everyday at the asport is soccquarium.Glens favourite sport is soccer.Glen is 8 feet tall.He has 2 children.The dolphin hag as a long neck.Its as long as a leg of a chair.Glen has a big mouth.Glen has grey skin and his favourite thing to do is play around with small kids.Glen likes to play with friends.Glen loves watching mickey mouse club house with his kids. The boy on the right is 11 years old.He is wearing a red and black checkered shirt from cotton on.He is wearing black skinny jeans from hallenstines.He likes to wear chucks tat you can get from number one shoe warehouse.He is from Egypt.He likes to play with dolphins.He has brown eyes.He loves to watch everybody loves raymond.He has black hair and loves girls that are smart.His name is Fred.He has big ears and a very small nose. (Jope)

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  24. Dreamy Daniel Dolphin.

    This drimatic dolphin is 13 years old, he has a metallic blue eye and also has a shiney blue fin,he's a friendly dolphin who gives people hugs because when they're sad he'll just make them feel proud. He is quite lonely because he has no friends but his friend that he is hugging, his name is Carter. He likes to swim with his friend and play around with him, but one thing is not to fight over anything. The things that he likes to do with his friend is play Football. This fascinating dolphin is just an energetic dolphin, He looks like he's going to cry because of the hug he's cuddling to Carter. Do you reckon the dolphin was in the competition? well i think i do because all these attitude that he's being is good. He's a good dolphin, not a bad dolphin. The sad thing was,that his parents left him when he was two, because his parents doesn't want a kid so they wanna get tutored.
    (Vehar)

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  25. The girl's name is Lee Shao. She has no friends, no parents and is a very lonely girl. She was living with her grandparents but she didn't like them so she always goes out to the sea. The people of Lee Shao's country - NZ - believe in horrible myths of the sea. But Lee Shao didn't believe in the myths. She cried and cried at the sea and drew her parents face in the sand. When she looked up at the sky it was dark and she needed to go back home. "I wish I had a friend" Shao said. Ann

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  26. One day jane met a whale and dolphin combined creature it was short and bolkey with skiny long arms,fins heavy eye lids it has super powers his power is to be able to swim like a speeding bullet. Jane had this awsome brown t-shirt and also has a super power and that is to run and swim faster the the speed of light. Jane is a female with dark black as the night heavy eyes
    and she never takes her clothes off because her super powers might activate.
    by (daniel)

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  27. Steve is a young boy he is twelve years old.
    He loves animals he has a pet Dog, Cat,Rabbit, Dolphin and a pet shark. His pearant let him have as many animals as he wants.
    He wears blue Levi jeans with a brown top and has red eyes and black and brown hair Steve is, a very angry child he has seven older brothers and five younger sisters Steve bullys all f his brothers.
    Steve eats anything you put on the table.



    Buck is a big furious Dolphin with big black and green eyes.
    He has a weired past of crime he speand ten years in jail.
    Buck has seven dots on his back each dot has a story.
    Buck has been treated like a baby his whole life.
    Buck doesn't really like people because his only friend is steve.
    Buck tris to make new friends but every time they ask something his answers is you can be my dinner tonight.
    P.S did you know Steve is Bucks step brother

    BY ALEXANDER Mcfelin

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  28. Dorothy the dolphin

    Dorothy the dolphin is a small grey hetors dolphin that is only found in New-Zeland. Dorothy is nine years old and likes to live in akoroa harbour. Dorothy is 106 cms long and is 64 cms wide. She also likes the company of Max the human.Dorothy is also very fast in the water and often thinks of him when shes swimming.

    Max the human
    Max is a 13 yer old human who attends Riccarton School.He is also a good friend Dorothy .Max is very attending to Dorothys needs as she needs alot of water.Max is very small for his age ,Max has natural black hair , and a dwarf like nose and a can do smile. in Maxs spare time he gos down to the warth to see Dorothy
    ethan

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